Very good guide

Yes I used to play that way too, but I noticed it's so much easier to kite people when you add some more early points in Frost Shot.

and i will be making alot of improvements by next is my goal + get a link to a replay of a game or 2 one from a 1.4-/1.5k elo game because this seems to be where people get stuck. and thank you alot for the link cbandicoot ill try to make good use of it

see the thing is volley is better for random harass without taking dmg and I tend to just farm away and people just let you from 1.5k elo almost to 2k and I just don't even try for the kill most of the time unless i have a gank and arrow volley + dmg of you and jungle kill people before they even get out of stun like 50% of the time or some one will just flash away and kill the gank anyways. but as i said its up to everyone to change to fit their play style and im just tring to tell people what iv found to work.

It's still a well set-up guide though.

Check this stuff out:
http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/mobafire-support/frequently-asked-questions-read-me-1272

Especially the part about how to use BBCode.

Good luck! I'm definitely going to try that first build. However, I'll be maxing frost shot first and volley last, because the extra damage on volley is really bad and the shorter cooldown is not what you need in early/mid. The extra slow is.

yeah sorry that it isn't the best looking guide out there yet its my first guide. and just wanted to get the info out to people because i just broke 2k elo and wanted to help others do the same. i will be adding to it and putting out 3-6 more guides on the other champ I play alot(nidalee, lee sin, jax, panthon,udyr and cait) hopefully i make them look more appealing so more people will like them and just try out my builds and just give me some great feedback

Completely agreed with the other two. It's so... Plain. |:

Good build, but just as Siveo said, it doesn't look complete enough, so I won't up-vote or down-vote it. Work on it a bit, i'll comeback to give you my feedback, after trying it of course.

It's a nice guide, you tend to help people with getting their elo up but I would suggest adding some colors, columns, links, ...

It's really boring to read your guide! It's just walls of text!

I won't up or downvote your guide yet since you still need to work a lot on your guide!