Don't be discouraged by this, but your guide needs a lot of help.

The grammar is awful and you lack a lot of capitalization (like in your titles). You have six points in Burnout and overall your build and masteries aren't very effective on a champion like Shyvana. You need basic coding help and breaking up your wall of text into sections.

You can completely re-hash this or just kinda give up. Just try and learn more from your resources on the site.

Oh also, lol at 103% crit chance.

Dat wall of text.
Also capitalize your titles.

Why would you buy that much damage gear without investing in health or lifesteal, considering you are a MELEE champion that mostly initiates fights and has a Q that can't even crit

Infectious Lepar brings up a good point, but perhaps you should just archive this guide until you actually learn how to play the game, that would be your best option

Your guide has a lot to be desired.

You need to work on coding it, adding color, and adding more sections.

Consider archiving this guide and re-publishing it when it is more complete.

For trick on how to create a guide check out JhoiJhoi's guide about making guides.