Hey Harrier :3
hoffe du kennst mich noch x3
hmh du könntest bei deinem Guide mehr strukturierung einbauen :D
wenn du das schaffst kriegst du ein +1 von mir ^-^

halt mich auf dem laufenden :D

- IVIarcoØ <3

not enough detail on item choice IMO

Well you asked me to check your guide and so I did. I would really like to get some details why to pick some items and as you were already informated that codes could make your guide look better. Add more information to masteries and runes and add some color!

How to play section should give more information and maybe pictures. But still remember to keep your guide clear and easy to read.

Just tell me when you have fixed your guide and I read it again.

I am a fan of short guides, however this one is really short. Nice start and I think it's awesome you use 2 languages.

It is a good start, but needs more details and information. Please see my post already in the Discussion section.

Thank you,
Typhon Grey

It is a good start, but you need way more detail and analysis. Why do you make the choices you do, why do you not use one spell over another, what other ways are there to build plan for continginces? There are all questions you should consider.

The dual language is a good idea, but I would do 2 separate guide pages to avoid confusion. I read and speak just enough German to get arrested or killed depending on the company I keep, most most people won't know any at all. Having to read through a foreign language that you do not understand is really annoying and most will just not do it.

Here are a couple of resources that were suggested to me to help learn to write a guide:
jhoijhoi's How to Make a Guide
Learning BBCode

Thank you,
Typhon Grey