Hi Cooljayjay, I was reading over your guide and I believe there are a few ways you can improve it;

- Paste your work into Microsoft Word to check for grammatical and punctuation errors or turn on your web browsers spellcheck(if your browser has it).
- Instead of providing short and concise reasons to using something i.e. barrier, try expand your reasoning such as when should you use it and when you shouldn't use it etc.
- One final point for improvement is that I think you should limit the use of "unprofessional" phrases such as "I Never Seem To Have Any Problems With Fizz He's Just Free Food." as this can sometimes bring negativity to your guide regarding clarity.

If you apply my thoughts I will gladly take a look at your guide again.