Meh, you need a more comprehensive guide, laning tips, ganking tips, what items to build if they have massive AP teams etc. This is just a cookie cutter build, if you try to use this build every game you will probably lose alot of games or die a ton.

not bad but i would take out frozen mallet if u were looking for slows it wont help her attacks are magic which means only herauto attacks will slow. if u want the slow go for a crystal septer or lane with people with stuns or slows