needs more pictures

look at my new build please:)

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-mad-scarecrow-jungle-fiddle-includes-mid-guide-220582?revision look at my new build please:)

At least he gave us his thoughts on Kennnen. It just needs to be more appealing (pics, scenarios, etc), and it will be a great guide.

its my first guide sorry

Nobody would be able to understand this guide. He's barely trying.

Nothing much in it, does not account for various scenarios reads more like an opinion/quick summary than a guide. You never even say what all his skills do in the guide, a novice league of legends player would never be able to understand this.
Put guides through spell check before posting makes them look nicer, and they are less annoying to read.

Just a wall of text, bad grammer and capitlization. Make it more appeling.