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I've tried AA staff anivia, never worked well for my playstyle. I've also tried mana regen runes, and I've found that since Anivia can solo blue pretty effectively after level 6... mana regen is rarely an issue. The only difference between having blue and not having blue after your ROA is fully built is

1. CDR (the obvious)

2. How easily your ult can be spammed and kept up.

3. Your poking effectiveness with your q

Please replace the 5 greater glyph of knowledge by greater glyph of replenishment They are useless throughout the game, and thats when they actually kick in. You don't even build Archangel's Staff.

Lol, 5 mana per level glyphs. Typical anivia guide, nothing new was brought to the table except for lulz runes.

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506

try using that ^^; itll help alot
you need to explain the other availible items/mastery/runes/etc
and try to be as in-dept as possible; just because you write: i play anivia alot im a pro with her" it doesnt mean it fits their playstyle.
just cuz you know when to or how to use ignite doesnt mean they do or if they like to spam their spells alot and use clarity doesnt mean you shouldnt explain why its a bad/gud idea this way viewers will become more understanding to the game and this way theyll be more competition for evry1 instead of letting them hate the game and grief on the internet that it sux (like maple story, runescape, etc.) and will slow the increase of LoL playerbase