Hello, you requested a review from my review service, found here.

I had a lot of stuff to talk about, so I just printed your guide, marked it up with pen, and then scanned it - I hope that's okay; I felt like if i didn't do that my comments would be unclear at some parts.

At any rate, I thought you've made a good start to your guide, but there is still some stuff that you could add to make your guide better. Check my PDF for more info. Let me know what your thoughts are on my comments.



Let me know if you have trouble reading my chicken-scratch. I know my handwriting isn't the best, so if you have trouble reading anything from my review just send me a PM with the passage that you can't read and the page number and i'll translate it for you ;)

I encourage you to consider changing sections of your guide after reading the comments. If you strongly disagree with my comments and do not want to implement the changes i put forth, that's okay, but it'd do you good to still add a little bit of clarity to the passages that I talked about in my comments.

Once you've made some edits to your guide, feel free to submit your guide to my review service for a re-review =) I'd really like to see your guide be successful. If you think you really got something out of my review, just throw me a +rep. It gives me a good idea of whether I need to re-evaluate some aspect of my guide reviewing.

Thanks for your time,
~U