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A well timed Impale can pull an enemy even after they have used Flash this requires extremly precise timing and is difficult to pull off.
(1) The Hyphen: According to Wikipedia,"The hyphen (‐) is a punctuation mark used to join words and to separate syllables of a single word. The use of hyphens is called hyphenation. The hyphen should not be confused with dashes (‒, –, —, ―), which are longer and have different uses, or with the minus sign (−), which is also longer." After reading this, it should be quite obvious that you are lacking the hyphen between "well" and "timed".
(2) The Conjunction: According to Wikipedia, "...a conjunction (abbreviated conj or cnj) is a part of speech that connects words, sentences, phrases, or clauses. A discourse connective is a conjunction joining sentences.[citation needed] This definition may overlap with that of other parts of speech, so what constitutes a "conjunction" must be defined for each language. In general, a conjunction is an invariable grammatical particle, and it may or may not stand between the items it conjoins." After reading this, it should be blatantly obvious that you are lacking a conjunction between " Flash" and "this". However, you could also insert a semi-colon or a period between the two words for a similar effect.
Unfortunately, there are more grammar mistakes throughout your guide, but I think after reading this comment, you should be skilled enough to fix these grammar mistakes yourself.
I'm a nice guy so I will not downvote your guide just yet, but if you don't make these changes by this time next year, then a down vote will be coming your way.
I like the build but I suggest getting shurelya's faster as it will greatly help when ganking.
I hope that you will go more in depth by the time.
Oh and you better turn comment to vote on.
+1 from me, good start.
1) More colours, especially near the beginning as that's the first thing people read and what I saw was a block of plain text. Highlight important keywords.
2) Provide some sort of map in the jungle routes section. Players love maps.
3) More detailed items section. Consider using larger icons and changing the formatting on it altogether:
4) Turn on Require Comment to Vote.
+1 for effort. Good luck!