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Sejuani Build Guide by Joshified

Tank Spectacular Snowballing Sejuani [Jungle]

Tank Spectacular Snowballing Sejuani [Jungle]

Updated on May 13, 2013
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Arenor (8) | July 12, 2013 3:32pm
I'm not going to vote because I think this needs some work. Overall you should get a +vote but it's just missing too much.

Please don't take this the wrong way, I'm giving you criticism strictly so you can improve.

Cheatsheet


You put "core items" on the wrong items. not the name, I mean the little box that says "core items"
The full build should be marked as "core items" so the cheatsheet will show the stats you have with those items, currently your cheatsheet shows the stats Sejuani has with only three items.


Coding


well you're new, so it's ok, but if you want to learn more there are plenty of guides for it, the basic one is BBcode Guide. If you want to, feel free to Pm me and I will give you coding advice (or advice on anything really)
Some major points,
  • Pros/Cons, they are just on the side... fill the whole page
  • Masteries, disapointing. You didn't even list the masteries. Add a picture and explain each mastery.
  • Runes, again, fill the whole page
  • Items, add some larger icons, to indicate more accuretly what the items are. this for example is size 70.
  • Jungling, add coding. alot.


    Content


    Your content is fine, but lacking a few things. First thing I noticed is that Ganking is under "jungling" section. Make a chapter dedicated to ganks.
    Explain your masteries more thoroughly.
    I peronally disagree with your jungle route, but this is your guide and I respect that.
    You didn't explain summoner spells, skills, and skill sequence, consider adding these chapters.


    General


    Turn on C2v (comment to vote) so you won't get troll votes.
    Changelog should never be at the start, EVER. move it to the end, even after the summary.
    add some pretty pictures :) alot of people give guide graphics in the art section of the forums Here


    So overall you have a lot of work to do, I am expecting a big improvement from this guide, when you feel ready, Pm me and I will take another look, and then I might vote. Good luck :)
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TOTESMCSCOTES (11) | May 18, 2013 1:39am
Turn on C2V, archive if not finished, remove walls of text. Peace
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-NA- Veng Lmfao (169) | May 13, 2013 5:52pm
Change log shouldn't be first tbh.
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Joshified (7) | May 13, 2013 5:35pm
Kind of new to the whole BBCode thing, so I am slowly trying to get those pictures in there.
Thanks for the help though, that was exactly what I was looking for in terms of feedback C:
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Deadlydave (46) | May 13, 2013 5:33pm
You should add more to the jungle path section like pictures or something like that. It is a pretty large wall of text with not much BBCode. That is the only way I would read it. Message me if you decide to add more to that section and I will vote.
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