Alright guide except for the item build. You NEVER rush a phantom dancer as your first item for melee carries, the only carry I know that is an exception is Xin Zhao. Your main priority should be farming for a BF Sword, ganking to get your IE THEN building towards a Phantom.

Madred's isn't that great for tryd, get last whisper or Black Cleaver instead, remember you should be focusing on large crits, not fast attack speed that slowly drains HP, which madred's focus on.

Otherwise great build.