Ok thanks, I updated my page to make it more readable, i hope more people will give
me their oppinions.

Ok, I'll give a little feedback.

1. Health Pots are definitely a must. Five at the beginning.
2. Wriggle's Lantern before Madred's Bloodrazors.
3. Udyr scales terribly in MR. Suggest getting a Wit's End if your going to DPS.
4. Drop the Spirit Vistage. CR is useless, and if you get a Wit's end, then you can use that spot to grab a Frozen Mallet, and extremely useful item.
5. NEVER start out with Tiger Stance. At the most, Tiger should come out 4th. Too bad early game.
6. Just a tip. I could barely read through your book located directly above the comments section. Organize it if you want people to read it.

I got 190 views so far and one vote, but no comments.I would like to know what u think of this build and what i did right/wrong.Therefor i put the comment to vote thing on.
I realise i didnt put hp pot in my build, as in my opinion this is optional, u could use it, but since i dont jungle off the bat i mostly dont.