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Veigar Build Guide by MuStyler

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League of Legends Build Guide Author MuStyler

Veigar-Tiny Man with Huge Burst

MuStyler Last updated on August 9, 2012
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MuStyler's Forum Avatar by MuStyler » April 25, 2012 1:57pm | Report

So now its published please say really what you think and what is bad and good and some ideas what to change changes would be nice too please :)

Paladin045's Forum Avatar by Paladin045 » April 25, 2012 5:26pm | Report

I don't doubt that you spent a lot of time on this, and the content seems sound (for the most part), but I do have a few suggestions, for this build and for future builds you might do.

1. Write each section in MS Word, or if you don't have that, OpenOffice (it's like MS Office, but free). You said you're on the EU server, so I appreciate that English may not be your native language, but your paragraphs are rather hard to read =P Fix the grammar, and you may find people will be more forgiving when rating your work.

2. Don't publish until the build is done. I know this from experience; I accidentally published my first build early. If it doesn't get any votes within the first few hours that it's on MOBAFire, it never will. People are less likely to vote if you don't have all your content up yet.

3. Don't abuse the color scripts. People are less likely to read something if looking at it makes their eyes hurt.

I can't in good conscience up-vote this until I can understand more of it (your run-on sentences make things very confusing), but I will be watching. Make a few changes, and I'll get back to you.


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MuStyler's Forum Avatar by MuStyler » April 26, 2012 11:28am | Report

Paladin45 ty for that nice comment.

1. Ok i will use openoffice now and i will try to rewrite the text correct. you are right english is not my native language and i am learning it this is the reason why i took for me longer do this

2. I can save this one and delete and later publish again with everything what do you think?

3. Yeah i see this rainbow text :D and i will change it ;)

i will change the guide when i have time (tomorrow i think ;))
well the comment below is an ad... i do not want thiis but ok.

Sunli Min's Forum Avatar by Sunli Min » April 26, 2012 7:36pm | Report

About your title.

THATS WHAT SHE SAID

jk jk overall nice guide


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