ah fine. sorry for my poor english.

He means don't use slang. Cearule, if you actually read it says his english isn't the best, give him a break.

whad does it means?
"write the words out"

Poorly written. At least use capitalization and write the words out.

i added a new chapter right after the introduction. so people can understand why i love this char.

thank you for vote and comments. i'm just new on BB code etc so i did my best. i will update it soon.

You may want to put on comment to vote, and you might want to add some pictures other than that nice guide

thank you for your vote and comment. this is my first build. sorry for my bad english, as u said english isn't my first language. as long a u can understand its good enough to me :) . i could have said a lot more about gameplay but I feel it will have pissed off most of my readars

Terrible grammar, I'm thinking english isn't the first language. However, all the information is good. Also, pretty straight to the point and, other than the grammar issues, easy to absorb.