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Posted a Comment: Sep 18th, 2011
"Hi friend,
Things that need work:
The writing.
The cluttered feeling you get from reading a section that is nothing but one big paragraph uninterrupted by pictures, links, videos, or smiling kittens.
I feel it needs to be a bit longer, maybe a section for items, AND a section for the stages of "
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Posted a Comment: Sep 18th, 2011
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