[Ranged AD Carry] Dastin, the Outlaw of Piltover

[quote=LordAwesome][center][b]Cresten[/b] The Law's Bane Hello! I am LordAwesome, here with my first Hero Idea! Please and rate and give constructive criticism. Thank you and enjoy! Cresten was born of brigands and theives in the City of Progress, or Piltover. He was not just an ordinary criminal. At the age of 15, Cresten robbed and stripped a wealthy stateman of his valuables, only to be caught and chased down by Caitlyn, the stateman's son. Barely escaping, Cresten honed his skills and became one the most known and feared bandit of Piltover. Not forgetting the humiliation of losing the Caitlyn, Cresten committed notorious crimes and heists, always leaving an opulent card with a "C". Although Cresten was disgraced by Caitlyn, Cresten can not admit him not falling for Caitlyn's tantalizing beuaty. "We could make a good couple, her 'n me. 'Cept we'd be huntin' for each other not knowin' we the targets!" "I WILL capture him. Me, and me alone." - Caitlyn (Story could use some work. In Caitlyn's backstory, it say's Caitlyn has an arch-nemesis with a name starting with a letter "C". I don't know who it is, but it seems perfect for Cresten!) About Cresten [b]Role[/b]: Ranged AD Carry [b]Visual[/b]: [img]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/101/0/5/Red_Dead_Redemption_by_patrickbrown.jpg[/img] (It's the guy from Red Dead Redemption but it really fits Cresten, except change the facial expression into a smile, remove the carbine in his right hand, and maybe he's wearing a brown cape.) [b]Audio[/b]: (Western accent) Movement: [list] Righ' on. Im movin'! They ain't gunna catch me. I know my way aroun', summoner. Geeeeez, what's with the rush? Attacking: They dead already. Bam, bam, bam, aha! You ain't going nowhere. The Sherrif gunna be real mad, haaahaha! Shootin'. Taunt: I don't even know why you try. Joke: Okay, so there was this blonde, and there was this.. You ain't even listenin!! [b]Skills[/b][/center] Passive: Outlaw - Each attack against an enemy Champion increases Cresten's attack speed by 7/8/9%. This can stack. Maximum of 10 stacks. Lasts 15 seconds. Only works on champions. Increments at levels 11 and 16. [b]Q Skill: Impairing Shot[/b] - Cresten shoots at an enemy's weak spot, dealing his damage +15/25/35/45/55 and slowing the enemy by 30/40/50/60/70% for 3 seconds. Mana Cost: 30 Cooldown: 15/12/10/7 Note: Good skill for harassing and chasing to get those few extra shots for the kill. Works well late game. On-hit effects like crits and armor reduction don't proc when using this skill. Note: This is kinda like Gangplank's Parrrrley, except it slows and it doesn't apply on-hit effects. [b]W Skill: Eat my Dust[/b] - Passive: Cresten gains 3/6/9/12/15% movement speed and 6/8/11/13/15% dodge. Active: Cresten kicks up a dust clooud. Enemies within the cloud have their armor reduced by 8/12/14/16/18% and have a 50% chance to miss on attacks. Cloud lasts 2.5/3/3.5/4/4.5 seconds. The reductions are constant while the affected units are inside the cloud. Armor reduction and blind have a sustained duration of 1.5 seconds. Passive bonus is lost while skill is active. Cooldown: 14 all levels Note: Good in 1v1 fights and also irritates tanks and makes squishies sad. Very sad. Note: Thanks DuffTime for the balance suggestion! [b]E Skill: Noxian Roulette[/b] - Cresten forces his target to play Noxian Roulette. The target will either shoot himself for 70/110/150/200/240 (+70% of ability power) damage, or the target will get feared for 0.5/1/1.5/2/2.5 seconds. 25% chance both will happen. Damage or fear will happen 2 seconds after Cresten casts it. Mana Cost: 70 Cooldown: 14/13/12/11/10 [b]R Skill [/b] - [b]Run 'n Gun [/b]- Cresten, with his unmatched skill with the gun, does not have to stop and aim his gun. He gains + 60/70/80% attack speed while this skill is activated. Dastin's damage is reduced by 30/30/30% while this skill is active. Lasts 6/7/8 seconds. Mana Cost: 150 Cooldown: 90/80/70 Note: What this skill basically does is, it gives Cresten steroids which allows him to run and shoot at the same time. He doesn't have to stop and do the attack animation. He also gains lots of attack speed. [b]Recommended Items[/b] Start with Doran's Blade. Then get Berserker's Greaves. Then BF Sword just for damage, then build Phantom Dancer. Upgrade the BF Sword into a Black Cleaver, then Trinity Force. Then you can get either Madred's Bloodrazor or Bloodthirster. Then finally a Banshee's Veil, for survivability. NOTES: Numbers can change! Just tell me how you like the concept. :) Changelog: 8/30/11 - Idea made 8/31/11 - Removed "Suppressive Fire" and replaced with "Eat my Dust". Changed "Hekstek Eplosive Rounds" to "Noxian Roulette". 9/1/11 - Added backstory, image and recommended items. 9/2/11 - Changed Eat my Dust's active. 9/7/11 - Tweaked E skill[/quote]

[quote=gwadzila]Passive: WUV IT Q: Nice W: In my opinion, not enough benefits for standing still. I would lower the slow and up the damage. E: The passive is a little strong. If there are 5 champions around (so basically in a teamfight), you have a free Ghost. However, the active is meh. You already have the same thing in your W, meaning that while it may be useful, it isn't very unique. I think you could do some cool things with this skill, however. Maybe add in a short stealth, or double the MS bonus? Maybe a snare? R: I would make the damage reduction 30% at all levels, maybe buff the attack speed bonus at early levels and nerf it at later levels (60%/70%/80%?). OVERALL THOUGHTS This guy has an interesting kit. His passive, passive on W, and ultimate combine extremely well. However, his Q and W active stunning him gives very little incentive to use these spells, especially since people would play him as an in-and-out ranged carry IMO. Also, dat ult with red buff or FM... you could kite Ashe with that, for god's sake. Very cool concept, I hope to see you more in this subforum (we're a little short on people here)[/quote]

[quote=LordAwesome]Thank you! :) I edited some stuff also. Check them out and tell me if it's better or not. :D[/quote]

[quote=DuffTime]I advise these changes to eat my dust (Yes a silence would be horrifically OP): You gain the passive dodge and move speed; Activate; Creston kicks up a dust cloud, (200 - 400 aoe range, which stays for 3-4 seconds or so) enemies within the dust cloud have thei armor reduced by 10%/12%/16%/18%/20%, and have a 50% chance to miss on attacks. When you cast the cloud, you lose the dodge and move speed. When the cloud ends, it comes back to you and you gain it back, and have a 12 second cooldown or something. It will allow you to decide when you want to burst, and will offer you some utility in dealing with annoying Tanky DPS types who charge you down.[/quote]

[quote=LordAwesome]Ok thanks! I'll change it now.[/quote]

[quote=DuffTime]If you add invis it will make him a bit too much like Vayne or Akali. :P Also, it's probably better if the blind/armor reduction are constant while inside the cloud, and have a sustained duration of 1.5 seconds after you leave it. That will cause players to want to move around the cloud and let you zone them/control space more effectively. I just think the dynamic would be more fun that way. If the duration is just 4.5 regardless, once you touch the cloud, you'll either run straight forward or straight back. I also noticed you chose flat ArP. I have no personal preference, but I'm wondering why :D[/quote]

[quote=LordAwesome]Hmm, I thought so. :P Ohh I didn't think of that. Anyways thanks a lot! :D I forgot to put the % sign lol. Will change now. :D[/quote]

[quote=DuffTime]30% is probly too high. I think 12/14/16/18/20 % would be better... Maybe even 11/12/13/14/15%[/quote]

[quote=DuffTime]30% is probly too high. I think 12/14/16/18/20 % would be better... Maybe even 11/12/13/14/15%[/quote]

[quote=LordAwesome]Tweaked the W skill. :D[/quote]