What 501G said

Hi there,

I have just read your guide and im going to write you a little review now ^^

So let's get started:

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Pros:

+ The outward appearance of your guide is good. You are using BBcode adequatly and you leave spaces between paragraphs. This makes your guide comfotrable to read. Espeacially by the use of line deviders.

+ The choice of your items is well explained and sounds sensible.

+ You split up the masteries into three categories. This might be a question of taste but i like that.


Cons:

- Skills - It seems like you only have copied the original skill explanation. What is interesting for us is not what the skills do but how we can make use of them. Better describe when to use them and give some tips if there are any.

- Runes - Same thing as with the skills. We all know the runes or we can look at their benefits by rolling over the image with the mouse cursor. More interesting would be why you chose to pick exactly this runes. Why no others? Are there other possibilities?

- Summoner Spells - I disagree on Flash beeing recommendable to every Champ. Ezreal or Ahri have skills that might be enough to flee from battles so it would not be neccessary for them to chose Flash and an other summoner spell might bring a bigger advantage.

- Masteries - You do not really justify your choice here. For example at Arcane Knowledge you only say "You need this" or in case of Arcmage "This is good". Well this might be but tell us why it is good!

- Spelling and Grammar - On the whole you language is okay but sometimes you do some grammar mistakes like for example when you are talking about Frozen Heart: "He have a low price" should be "It has a low price".


Further suggestions of improvement:

~ Give the reader some options. Optional items, runes or masteries give the reader the opportunity to experiment with your build and to fit different situations. Situative items would be a great improvement, too.

~ Gameplay - In my opinion it would be very interesting to know how to play Morgana and not only how to equip her. Maybe you might want to add this section.

~ Videos - Do this videos really make sense? I feel like they are only littering your guide.

~ Warding Map - The map you have chosen to show where to ward looks a little stuffed. Maybe try to find a cleaner one with less drawings inside and only one language used. Furthermore I dont think Morgana has to ward everywhere. This should be the job of the supporter and/or jungler. Important warding areas might be thos two bushes on the left and right side of the mid lane.

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So this was my review. If you keep working on you guide and let me know if you have improved it, I will take a second look and maybe give you a +1 then.

Moreover I would appreciate if you could review my guide, aswell. If I was able to help you a little, don't forget to hit +rep ;)

Post Scriptum: Why did you choose to keep the Doran's Ring instead of exchanging him with an other stronger item?

Morgana have good dmg she not needed many talents at offence, she must be 9/0/21 and buy 3 dorans ring , zhonya .. Imho