Lol we all commented around the same time :PPP

the guide is really well layouted and looks just great!

I'd suggest some things tho:

1. Rylai's benefits ahri way more than RoA - you should get the bluebuff so you shouldn't have any mana problems. I'd probably get it before RoA and leave RoA completely out of the build :P I'd probably go: boots + 3 pots, hextech revolver - rylais, wota...

2. I'd suggest making some screenshots or a video to get a better understanding how to position with her. And how to act in tf's.

3. At your 2nd sheet cheat your masteries show 21/0/0

4. And I'd suggest 21/0/9 for your "standard" build you want those aggression boosts :P

hope that doesn't sound too harsh lol:P

All in all a great job I just don't like your build.
In my opinion rylai's is the best item on ahri benefit's her even more than deathcap - dat utility!

Well I hoped these suggestions will help you!

Visually appealing guide.

Firstly this is one of the best written guides i've read in a while. It has a conversation going on in your head while you read it. Somewhat like my writing styles, but with better vocab. Secondly, it's got great coding, and pictures. Overall a well designed guide. But its time for me to do my job as a reviewr ;3.

- Your chapter titles are to long and over the point. Simple chapter titles would be better. For example. When you talk about Ahri's Lore, just write Lore. Not Mercy is a human thing etc. your chapter titles make it confused for people that are just glancing over it, where they are. If i was a random person jumping on this guide while in game just to see what masteries i should use etc. I wouldn't have time to look through the guide itself, i would just click the masteries chapter title. Sadly you do not have that :P. Just simplify your chapter titles, but you don't need to get rid of them all. And I do see that you have (Masteries) like this, but really... Simplify it :P

- In your intro, you should shorten it up. The intro is basically a overview of what this guide is. You don't need to go in-depth about it. Put everything like the Damage and etc. In your Skill section

- Have your role of the team with your Gameplay Section. Thats more Gameplay then anything. Or close to your gameplay section. You should have your guide grouped like that.

- In your Rune section, have your Quintessence come last. It should go like this, Mark Seal, Glyph Quintessence

-You have some wrong info on your seal of clarity. They dont give MP they give Mana Regen. I think you have that wrong :P

- You should say what you use as runes, so someone that wants to know knows :3.

- Your warding section is confusing @_@ so...many....arrows...

- Uh... Strength of spirit gives life regen? CDR? Wtf lol

This is where i get harsh on ya. The first part was just to explain everything whats wrong etc. This is the gameplay part

- There are no better marks then the MPen Marks. Any other are unviable on a mage. Really they are. I've found that out, and after looking at stats etc. The mpen marks are the best thing, and shouldn't be replaced

- I'm disagreeing with your build big time. You buy things that you later build into, like your needlasly large rod. And you don't need that when you get it. You could have a faster RoA, but you get a large rod??? The sooner you get your RoA the better. Get your Rod after RoA Not before. You also get hextech revolver way late... Like extremely late. If your gonna buy the Will of Ancients, don't list out your Hextech Revolver. Also just get rid of everything but the completed items. Unless you need to show it, like the doran's ring boots etc. Less items more space

- You get Rabadon's way late. I usually get it after RoA or rylia's. Not after :/. Your AP would be pretty low, by the time you get Rabadons. But i would get RoA Deathcap, then Your scepter.

- If your playing AP ahri, you should be playing AP carry ahri. Your cheat sheet shows you playing support ahri? Do you play support ahri that often o_O.


I'm pretty brutatlly honest on your guide, but its overall very well written. I like your explaning, but disagree on many points. I won't upvote or downvote, until i see some improvement or not improvement o_O which will then lead to my downvote. But I hope you'll improve it, or at least explain your reasoning to me :) Hope i helped

Updates

Update - 21/03/2012

• Simplified section titles.
• Changed up the item build, Thank you Koksei for the advise.
• Organized the Rune layout so that they are in order, as well as fixed the mistake of having Strength of Spirit instead of Intelligence .
• Changed around the "Match break down" section to suit the new item build.
• Changed the "Gameplay" section to "Game scores and finished builds, to avoid any further confusion...
• Shortened up the Introduction and added a portion of it to her Abilities section.