psst you forgot to complete the Hextech Gunblade, and there seems to be 2 shoes on your guide xD but i see that it has improved considerably keep up the good work! :]

Thank You for all your constructive comments and i have edited the guide and i believe improved it by a huge amount thanks to MysticPuppet introducing me to Jhoihoi's guide to make a guide. Kudos to you my friend.

This looks good so far, but the main change I'd suggest is the removal of Deathfire Grasp. Since the CDR removal, it's way too expensive for what it gives you. 1000 gold isn't worth the active that you'll likely forget about when you need it anyway.

I agree with the comment above.

Add some coding and color (help for writing guides can you find when you search "Making a Guide", it has a karthus icon).

Add your mastery and rune images in the respective chapters.

And most of all, chop your big blocks of text in some smaller parts. (like I did with this message :P)

Good luck on your quest to writing good guides! :)

~Mystic Puppet~

P.S: Would you look at my guide as well? (also an akali build, a little different though :D)

Nice guide, i like all the pictures you added, but if i may suggest something, you should consider adding color and coding so its easier on the eyes.

Aside from that i would recommend some changes:
Hextech Revolver early is a lot better than rushing Rylai's Crystal Scepter. Sure the slow and health is nice, but you sacrifice sustain, some of that early game damage, and the damage you took in the time it took for you to build Rylai's Crystal Scepter would cause you to surrendering lane experience and ultimately easier to zoned out.

I also suggest you build Litch Bane as that is Akali's best source of damage

But aside from that great gob and keep it up! i'll be looking forward to seeing you improve :)

P.S. you forgot to put your rank 2 boots