Thx Bro

Uhm, this isn't fixing it.

I asked you to get a nice chapter structure, but you didn't change anything at all except adding a mastery page.

It is going to need a lot of work, and if you still want my help, you better not be lazy again.

Good luck,
-Meiyjhe

i fix it c:

This lacks content. That's all that needs to be said.

Bro, this guide really needs some structure.

You put 90% of your guide in the pros and cons chapter, which does not make sense at all.

What I advice:
Make multiple chapters, like:
* Introduction
* Pros and cons (You already have)
* Ability explanation
* Summoner spell explanation
* Runes explanation
* Masteries explanation
* Item explanation
* Tactics (You definately already have)
* Summary/conclusion (You already have)

In this order.

These are the basic chapters of a good guide. I advice changing your chapters asap.

I didn't vote yet, if you are interested in my vote, finish my tips and PM me.
I think you have to potential, but there is a lot that needs to change.

Good luck!
-Meiyjhe

I won't vote yet either. I disagree with the CONS line saying 'Doesn't have very much CC outside of his ulti': His bandage toss has a stun -> a stun is one of the best CC's there is and if a Katarina, Nunu & Willump, or another champ channeling or going ulti crazy: bandage toss is easily aimed and an ulti goes to waste. Besides, asking for more CC on a champion with SUCH an ulti is overdoing it. BIGTIME :P Many champions have zero CC, so I'd remove that line.

And: starting with Tantrum instead of Despair makes you alot less mana dependent, for whenever you get invaded. Try it and be convinced.

If you do not build wriggle's or any of the spirit items, i recommend starting cloth armor over machete. Slows down your clear a little, but it actually builds into something useful, so no money is wasted.

I do by the way recommend building a spirit item, as it speeds up your clear a lot. I tend to sell it lategame, but it is a good item to clear early.

Man what's up with that cheat sheet?You included a lot of builds but there is nothing on them.No items,runes or masteries.I think you should've improved more the guide before releasing it.Well,i won't vote yet.