Not bad formatting and good in-depth information. Just as icing on the cake consider adding graphics art. Like banners and stuff. I have some on my guide if you don't know what I mean. It'll make your guide look so much better.

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It worked very well, and your explanations helped me at my low level! :) Thanks for the build!

I do apologize if the BBC is a bit sketchy. I've done this whole guide on my cell phone, so it takes a while to edit.
EDIT: Images of match history will be posted by tomorrow at 5:00 PM Central Time (GMT -6:00). Also, is it preferred that I record a match and upload it? Should I have a commentary? Item and rune explanation included? Any feedback is great. Thanks for the help, guys. :)

I think Chroume means that your guide could use some color and banners and images and list and other wonders from bbcoding, thus, providing the guide =D

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And in my opinion get more tanky items =P

Edit: I see you have entered the righteous jhoijhoi's path to guide making, keep on the good work ^^

I will definitely revise my guide. Thank you for your suggestion to making my guide better and easier to comprehend! I'm sorry if the grammar is a bit rough, but I somewhat purposely typed in a "disrespectful and rough" manner. Should I change that, or may I leave it as is?

It's a good guide, but I think that it wouldn't hurt to be more specific, add some gameplay, how it is early game etc. And you might want to put Vampiric Scepter earlier on so you get early sustain, it's only 450g, no need to wait that long. ;)

I think it's a pretty good guide overall, but needs to carve out the rough edges, and try to use coding from jhoijhoi's Making A Guide, it makes it prettier and easier to read.

I hope you'll take them into consideration. :p

Peace,
Chroume