Really, needs more good looking. How to do this explained here. Also, Frozen Mallet on ranged champion is no good. It gives you cool slow, but that's all. You better take Exhaust instead of Ignite, and something like Banshee's Veil or other situational defensive item. Tell me in PM if you think it over, because I am Graves player too.

Thank you for your insight, I'll take a whack at it when I have a spare minute

Good guide but you need to get it more good looking! Lets see some more photos and in-depth talk about the champion, explain his abilities and the such. Otherwise a good guide, your item selections make sense and your tactics are sound, I wanna see more!