good build overall but i think you should get RoA before as it takes 10min to charge it. and zhonyas ring no linger exists :P

nice build it went from 46 to 48 when i liked it i feel like a hero

Write why you picked those items.. and tell us why you picked those marks also explained why you picked the skill trees etc... make sure you explain everything.. Pretend that the person reading your build.. is stupid.. lol... XD... I like how your fixing things keep it up.

Hey dude... came back to give you a few more suggestions.... try changing your marks...

Your Marks Should Be[You can choose or get a bit more creative]
A) ALL penetration [Some people do this but, I personally don't like] Potency or by lvl
B) ALL ability power [Most people use this] Potency or By lvl
C) Half Ability Power / Half penetration [because I've heard she already has good ability power to begin with] Potency or by level

Potency= the amount you already get right away..
By lvl= Worth late game :]....your choice...

Another thing.. try separating your text... people are too lazy to read...some people just like to know why you picked certain items... you Can divide it by sections and write why you chose that certain item... For EX : ITEM BUILD Or RUNE BUILD... Also make sure titles are the same color to keep things organized... and for example

Item Build:
Item #1 -
Item #2 -
Item #3 -

People are lazy.. they dont like to read everything.. Use the colors to make important facts Pop out, okay?

P.S. Check out my builds... you might learn something.. and read it if you have time :]

No worries mate. Did this build except for deathfire grasp which I changed for "+3% of your mana is converted to ability power item", unlucky for me we had a rage quitter but I still managed to get to 20 stacks. My final score was 22/10/14 or something like that.
+1

1.) i said you can do either or but ok ill change it.

2.) cooldown that only applys to your summon skills not spell cool down so i dont take it just because its a personal preference.

3.) ill change it but item order wise might be better to get roa 1st if your not doing to good.

4.) to the other post yeah i am not the best at grammer but i did what i could.

It's alright, but a bit of a chore to read. Try using sentences with full stops and commas. I agree with Tr4ce on his points. Fix up this things and a +1 coming your way. =D/

Ps. Some pictures would be great!

I can tell you why people might have down rated your build...
#1 you have mercury treads when you should have the boots that give 25% penatration.. you shouldnt be in the front so you should change that...

#2 Your masteries you dont get the cooldown on the last mastery tree..but you get the 10 gold? what a waste...

#3 Mejis before rod of ages [This is my opinion] But most people agree to this.

Although I wonder what else... cuz most of the items you have.. the best one has ;/
Hope you change this.. +1 [to help you out]

thank you i know i think people are just downvoteing so they can be on top....

good build +1 and its the same proplem with me too ppl downvote for fun and dont comment whats wrong wiht it. kids....

thanks but who voted bad =0 and why

Nice Build Man