I feel this guide is poorly written and lacking detail into anything related to the build you have selected. The statement you made in the comments that "This guide isn't for children." is also very dismissive towards your reader as though to say "If you can't understand it, then it's your fault."

why would u ever rush void staff? It makes no reason even if u have massive lead...it can only be considered as 6 item and not even then in most situations.

i made this guild for the people ive helped play with/train and by the time ive gotten done doing most the explaining about the game, well in other words i didnt make this guild for children...

This guide needs some serious work. For being a beginners guide, it is hard to read and vague. If you want to make this more readable, you need to work on the grammar and order and add some sections on technique and a few videos. Also need to have a better explanation of most of the items and what you are building. As a casual Ryze player I had a hard time and I cant see any beginner reading this guide for more than a few sentences before being lost.