If youre using jhoijhoi's template you should be mostly putting the items in between double open and double close square brackets. for example, putting double open square brackets in front of Vorpal Blade and double close square brackets behind it would show as something like Vorpal Blade. I can see abit of her format, but youre putting in information in the wrong places. A good general guideline would be not to delete any square brackets, or the BBCoding wont come out, just like whats happening in your guide...

I appreciate you guys commenting, I dont know how to use BBcodes, If someone can help me with that, I'll delete this one, and make a new and better one!

BBCode please! Will not downvote, but the walls of text overwhelm me!
Hope this guide turns out well!
-Utopus

You get upgraded boots way too late. Probably just a typo, but it warrants fixing.

And like they said, you really gotta code it, or people won't read it. You credit Jhoijhoi with the template, but A. you don't link her guide (you just say it can be found 'here') and B. you don't use it.

It's such a shame to see all this info go to waste just because internet people are too lazy to read pure text guides.

Yeah I agree with Peter; Turn Frozen Mallet into Frozen Mallet and we'll have some gold. Pictures every now and then wouldb e good too. Its scary to see large blocks of text
Also, Can you explain your summoner spell choice? I usually think that Shen grabs Teleport, since it has such great synergy with Shen's mobility through his ult and such. I'm not criticizing, but it would be good to see some reasoning behind your choices :)

Could be a nice guide but you have to use some bb codes. If there are a little colors and pictures in your guide it would be nice to read :D