Will vote later because I believe this guide is not finished. If you would just like to show your build to the world it should be said so in the description. Even then, you have to explain your build thoroughly.

some points I would like to make

- rushing the Nashor's Tooth destroys your early game. You probably won't even get to it before they grab a B. F. Sword and outdamage you easily.
- No penetration at all, tanks will just roll you over since you can't hurt them.
- You say you max Move Quick second, but it doesn't reflect what you picked out for your skill sequence.
- Most carries pick Ignite over Exhaust so you should spend a little more time explaining that choice.
- Grammar and spelling mistakes, the grammar mistakes I can live with because English isn't your strength, but the random spelling mistakes throws people off.
- Starting with Doran's Ring destroys your mobility, allowing the other AD carry to simply harass you easily because of your short range and low movement speed.
- The guide can use some color to be more attractive.
- Your item choices in your build does not match your choices in your guide.
- Neglecting to explain runes and masteries.

+ I like how you explain what you want to talk about in your introduction.
+ Decent explanations of item choices in guide.

Overall, this is a good start for what can potentially be very helpful for others.

Malady instead of Nashor's Tooth
I'll vote later

This build is not bad it does give survivability and a decent damage output.

Bad