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Creator: Foxy Riven September 16, 2014 5:33am
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xPolarbear: Done


Sandrino is next :)
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Hey Foxy. Love your guides and you inspirited me to make a guide so I want to ask for a quick review from you. :) I'm updating it almost every second day.


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Hi MrMad,

I'll try to finish up my last review tonight or see if I can squeeze yours in in between. I'm a bit busy lately, but I'll try to fend off my tendency to procrastination:p

It looks great btw, but I do have some input for you. You'll hear from me when I finish yours up :)
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- Mobafire Name: Nejohnson88
- Summoner Name: Nejohnson88
- Summoner level: 25
- Server: NA
- Link to your guide: Here
- Review style: In-depth

-Notes: On the grammatical and punctuation errors, I am working on it slowly. I am try to do it by myself as I study more but at this point I am lost.
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^Nehjohnson88 (and people above) I'm sooo behind in reviews (SORRY GUYS I EVEN LACK THE TIME TO WORK ON MY OWN GUIDES) that I won't be able to do yours properly. I can't do an in-depth review on your guide anyway tbh. All I can say is the following:

BE MORE INFORMATIVE

You're changing settings and stuff. First of all explain what and why your do what you are doing. A mere introduction about yourself doesn't cut it, what can I expect of this guide and why should I implement it? This should be clear from your title and introduction alone to gather readers. Also visuals. Not a single picture. You scare readers like that.

To do:
- Visuals
- In depth explanations
- Structure

Brainstorm a while longer and put words and structures on paper before pouring it into your guide.

Good luck :)
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Thank you for your time and looking into it. I will work on it soon.
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Okay, its been... A little over a year since my last review. In the meantime my guide has gone from rags to riches in many aspects. I would love a review and some help with a bit of coding that I've talked to you about.

Since I hadn't seen a response to one of my pms I figured you'd been inactive for a while. I was wrong xD.

I've decided to post on this because you cannot ignore it here! (MAUAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAAAAAAAAAAA).

- Mobafire Name: Seth346
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- Link to mu guide: Best Riven Guide NA xD
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I replied to your last messages come on man...

I'm kinda really busy with work all day, not much time is left for mobafire or even league itself (And yes I've been quite inactive).

I'll work on your coding as promised, but in-depth reviews will have to wait until I find some more time on my hands.
Thanks Emikadon for the sig!
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Alright. I'll do my best to think up more things to change. It's been a long time since I've had a review so I'm at a loss of what to change. You're pretty far behind in this and I can understand that since I've started my own review shop. Its hard to continuously review guide after guide. I don't want to ask for more than a review at a time because I know that's rude. I still want to make progress with my guide though.
If I helped you, I would appreciate a +rep
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Mobafire Name: NBD Sticky
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Summoner level: 30 (silver III curently)
Server: EUNE
Link to my guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/talon-reloaded-mid-lane-build-453171
Review style: Short Review

It's a BUILD (not a full guide) for talon mid, with the new assassin item Duskblade of Draktharr. Any comments will be appreciated, thanks. :)

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