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I made my markups and uploaded them as a PDF - I hope that's okay. As a reminder, the score that's attached with your guide isn't necessarily representative of the actual quality of your guide, but should instead be used as a resource to gauge the relative importance fo the points that i'm bringing up in my review.
A pretty good start to a guide; The first thing you should do is clean up that cheat sheet - Just make it look a lot more organized. Take a look at some of the really popular guides on this site to get a pretty good idea of what level of depth most people are looking for in cheat sheets. After you fix that, I'd like to see some content added on the gameplay section, especially with regards to laning safely, and how to position for team fights. Other than that, there are just a few things here and there that i'd like you to change, like your masteries, and removing that Thornmail. Since veigar is so reliant on his burst, you'll get bonus points for adding a damage table to your guide :>
I outlined my comments in the review pretty thoroughly, but if you have any questions, feel free to respond to my post here, post on my review thread, or PM me if for some reason i'm taking a long time to respond. Once you add adequate content to that gameplay section though, just post again in my review thread and I'll be sure to revisit your guide and consider upvoting it. At any rate, I hope you got something out of my review. If you did, throw me a +rep - it means a lot to me :)
Thanks a lot for your time,
Michael
Also, thank you utopus! I really appreciate it. There's no rush at all :)
I'm just going to give you a basic aesthetic overview (without readung the guide all too much).
Your runes section looks very awkward. Take a look at making a guide by jhoijhoi (i think thats how you spell it). Its a great way to help format and code your guide.
Chapters are a big no no especially when we are talkin aesthetics. Put all of your information in one chaoter and seperate it like i have my guide serperated (click the pic in my sig to see my guide). Jhoijhoi also offers a section on line breakers and broders if i remember correctly, so you should really look into that (if you cant find a link to her gude on this i have a link in my guide).
Your abilites section also looks awkard. Jhoijhoi also has a section on how to format it so its more appealing to the eye. Spells section and skill sequence look fine. Same with your burst combo section. I might stop by this guide again to see about reviewing the information in your guide and leaving a upvote. Again, this is just a aesthetic review. I wish you best of luck,
Mayomo