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Criticize and rate my Urgot Guide.

Creator: Periphetes January 26, 2011 8:51pm
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Guide can be found here:

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If a question or topic is only worth a single post, just put it in the comment there. Otherwise, post it here and we can discuss.

Be sure to rate only after reading the whole guide, as the build itself is unsubstantial.

I am looking for some general feedback about my Theorycrafting and Elo Hell sections. How could I improve them, what did I miss, etc.

Are my tips accurate? Is my theory correct?
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Matt wrote:

There is one rule though. If you link to your build in this topic, you must be doing so because you want help! Help formatting your description, help using advanced bbcode, help deciding what items to use, etc... Creating a thread simply to say "Hey look at my new build! <link>" is still not allowed, even here, as that serves no purpose.
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Matt wrote:

There is one rule though. If you link to your build in this topic, you must be doing so because you want help! Help formatting your description, help using advanced bbcode, help deciding what items to use, etc... Creating a thread simply to say "Hey look at my new build! <link>" is still not allowed, even here, as that serves no purpose.


I am asking for professional criticism.
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But thats really the same as "please give me feedback and rate my guide". If you took one or more aspect of your guide (e.g; "Is my laning section detailed enough, and is it an eye-sore?") it would be completely valid.

Perhaps toss up some key points you want feedback on? A little loophole in the rule :3
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Yes, I would like some feedback about my Theorycrafting and Elo Hell escape sections in particular.
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dont be so strict Scrax, at least its not "link - my build go rate end of post"

@ Periphetes
Instead of asking abotu going for your build you could specify your questions here and give a link at the end.
We dont like, how did you call it
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looking for some general feedback
stuff. Please understand us, we had 62958925823053 topics with spam inside we had to deal with.
Did i help you? Click that +Rep

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I'm not, it's just making sure the rules are being followed. I did give him a hint :)

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