You have you seals and glyphs backwards for the first build. Instead of Greater Seal of Force and Greater Glyph of Clarity you should have greater seal of clarity and greater glyph of force. Take a look you'll see what I mean. Other than that, great build!

Thanks ^^ Without you this guide wouldnt be in the recommended guides (top guides) Shiikan, you tha man! Btw, I dont gank that much, i lane quite a bit for the farm, lategame it's maxed anyways.

I use JhoiJhoi's separators, she doesn't mind you using them, but be sure to give her credit in the end of your guide

First type [ center ] (without the spaces)
Then click the picture at the top of the box you wish to add a separator, in the URL box add one of these:

http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/h380/thejhoijhoi/line-red.png
http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/h380/thejhoijhoi/line-yellow.png
http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/h380/thejhoijhoi/line-blue.png
http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/h380/thejhoijhoi/line-3.png
http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/h380/thejhoijhoi/line-purple.png

(Line-3 is Green)

then, afterwards, type [ /center ] (without the spaces)

thats it for the separators, but with your skill sequence, (note: I'm not telling you to change anything), I notice you don't get a second point in Shadow Walk until level 10. Is this because you prefer to stay on lane as opposed to ganking other lanes? If you gank other lanes, you'll find that you need more than 10 seconds to set it up correctly.

Hey Shiikan, could you help me, tell me how to make seperators? Thanks for any further advice.

I voted +1 ^^
The changes you made make the guide look smoother and more well put together. It's easier to read and you fixed (most) of the extra brackets. (There are still some here and there, and you have one [/color] somewhere up there)

Overall, a very nice guide to a pure AP Evelynn ^^

And one question (based on items)
Why Boots of Swiftness? Wouldn't Mobility Boots prove to be more effective as when you play AP Evelynn you try to assassinate. Or were you going more for a burst "caster" type of Evelynn, in which case Sorcerer's Shoes, Ionian Boots of Lucidity or Mercury's Treads (strictly CC and hard-AP enemy teams) would also prove viable choices.

I think you may want to include these or some other options for boots instead of just Swiftness/Mobility/Sorcerer's, because there are many ways to adjust your items based on the enemy team. And late game you'll want to sell your Doran's item. I'd suggest getting a Banshee's Veil for hardcore AP enemies, or Randuin's Omen for hardcore AD enemies. Another option is to get a philosopher's stone early, and level it up to Shurelya's Battlesong.

If you do choose to put Shurelya's Battlesong in the build though, be sure to include that it takes about 27-28 minutes to gain back the cost of the Philosopher's Stone, so taking Greed as one of your masteries will be a good choice if you want to purchase this item. (As this will cut the time down to about 17~23 minutes) and if you take just 1 gold per 10 sec quint, you will now cut the time down to a nice 17 minutes.

Ok thx for the replies, for the first kommentor: well if you want to jungle you'll need to get her jungle items. this is not a jungle guide ;)
Second commenter: well sorry but this guide is very new. Every day i fix a little bit
Third commenter: well i see what you mean but if she's fed she can deal dmg!

I like the effort you put in sadly eve isnt viable anymore

A couple things that stop me from voting (as I like the guide, but there are errors, etc)

1) You have a ton of extra "[" and "]" marks (these don't change my opinion on voting, they just bother me)

2) You have "Uniqe" items/"Uniqe Skills" which is spelled wrong. It should be "Unique". You also don't explain any alternative items for Evelynn. As well as the fact that your "Unique Items" section is sloppy. You have no spaces between items making them blend together (hard to read) and your coding is off. You have "Ryali's Crystal Scepter" which is spelled wrong, stopping the item to come up. It should be [[Rylai's Crystal Scepter"

3) Your calculations make absolute 0% sense. Most champions have 30 MR if not more. This is (if I remember correctly) about 23% reduced magic damage. So now you have your spectacular 212 magic damage hate spike doing only 48 damage. See the difference? (Ravage would be 178 damage, but because of the reduced armor/mr it would most likely deal more.)

4) Spelling errors. Everywhere. The sections will underline the text with a red squiggly mark if it's spelled wrong. "tgat" is not a word.

5) Your coding has problems under the "Uniqe Skills" section. (Should be "Unique Skills")

6) Your logic does not make sense. You say that Doran's Shield you do not recommend, if you read my Evelynn guide I recommend it as a starting item because it's perfect for Evelynn. Early levels you will not be slicing through enemy health like butter, you will be denting it and getting your OWN health sliced through. Doran's Shield stops you from feeding levels 1~6 (until you get your Sheen and Mobility Boots)

7) This one may be confusing so pay attention:
7a) You say "This is a whole 50% extra attack speed which makes you deal this damage even faster). The 50% attack speed is reduced slightly like Movement speed if you already have a lot of attack speed multipliers/adders.
7b) You say you can slow 3 targets with your "double slow trick". It will only slow two targets unless you use an item. When you use Hate Spike your stealth will be broken, and a slow will not be applied to Ravage.

8) I find it hard to tell you how much I hate your skill sequence. You take 4 points in Hate Spike when you only have 2 in Ravage. You even state that you know how bad Evelynn is at farming, so how do you expect to get kills with a level 2 Ravage? Kill-stealing?

There are some more things, but if you look over these ones you may find some of them. These are just the biggest problems I have.

It's a shame that only 36 people watched this guide for all the effort you have put in it.

What is your opinion on Eve as a jungler?