this build is bad...

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thanks bro really like i said i take the wriggles for mostly lane sustain so you can sell it afterwards for some other good late game item and since none of fiora's abilities (except her w) scale with ap really i don't feel its a very strong item to get just for the attack speed but the Blood razors is also a viable pick instead of the Bloodthirster

Nice guide! I don't delve into details on how guides are written, it doesn't matter to me. The main things I look for are uniqueness (does it look similar to most of the top 5 guides with some minor differences like an item or summoner spell), and does it stay on topic (do you talk about one thing concerning the champion let's say attack speed and then keep talking about it and moving away from how it affects the particular champion like do you get into the details like every champion has an "attack delay" that has to be account for when calculating attack speed and explain what exactly that is) and I have to say yes this guide does.

My favourite thing about this is the large amount of attack speed you have not counting for her ability. I'm personally going to get a Madred's Bloodrazor instead of Bloodthirster and try a Guinsoo's Rageblade instead of Wriggle's Lantern once if the game lasts long enough but that's just me.

When I first read a guide about an attack speed/on-hit Vayne I bought her and tried it out and it was a lot of fun for my first carry (I do play Udyr but it's more like an off-tank build otherwise I play straight up tanks or supports). Ever since then I've been wondering what other champions can be played attack speed/on-hit, and with your guide it looks like I can do that with Fiora so I'm going to buy her and try it out.

I know it's probably not the best way to play her seeing how all the other guides prioritize attack damage or crit chance/crit damage over attack speed/on-hit but I found it more fun going attack speed/on-hit.

So keep up the good work!

Specolar

Coding needs work, as has been pointed out above, and you also want to look at grammar. Most of your paragraphs don't end with periods, you don't capitalize "i", etc. You have a lot to say, and it looks like plenty of good info, but a guide really needs to meet certain requirements.

I will check back and vote on this if you clean it up some. I don't want to downvote you right off, but it doesn't deserve a +1 yet.

Turn on comment to vote before you get trolled harder than you already have been.

thnx didnt rlly now how to add the pics so tahts y all the abilities are in capitals so i was hoping they wouldve apear as pics

Like many other new guides, too text-based.
Check out Jhoijhoi's guide on making a guide!

I've been playing Fiora a lot lately, (past 20-30 games or so), so I think I have some insight on how to critique your guide.

I am not voting currently, nor have I tried, due to the fact that your guide is new and you should be allowed to expand and edit it first before you start getting down to the good stuff.

Going to tell you right now that you MUST read this guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506

It will help you make YOUR guide look beautiful, fun, and super cool to read!
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ITEMS: You need to add situational items. I also feel that Mercury's Treads are much more powerful than Berserker's Greaves.

As well, with Fiora's ultimate, you'll want some on-hit effect items.
Wit's End and Madred's Bloodrazor are good places to start.

RUNES: Remove the seals of warding and you're golden. You'll never need those if you have the glyphs. (Unless you're up against a 5 man AP team--Armor seals in general are a better choice)

SUMMONER SPELLS: You already have good alternatives, so I'll leave it at that. (I personally use Exhaust
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Anyway, read that guide I linked you to, and I'll check back soon to read and review your guide! (Don't worry, I won't forget!)

well man, the guide is not bad but try adding some pictures to it. Wall of text will make ppl lazy to read