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Creator: jhoijhoi June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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To Do List:

7) Ezreal - Hugin (pg 8) - 7/7/11
8) Teemo - Devilesse (pg 10)
9) Xin Zhao - Tinolas
10) Soraka - Summoner
11) Alistar - PsiGuard
12) Jax - Chesswinner

@orochinagi: If I haven't +1'd your guide yet, I'll do so now. Such a respectful and well-thought out reply! You clearly know Blitz - but there had to be a reason why my review wasn't glowing. I'll go check it out now, to see if there is any more criticism I can add.

EDIT: +1'd.

EDIT EDIT: If I have reviewed your guide, and you have replied to my critique in some way, please remind me to vote on your guide if I have forgotten.

EDIT EDIT EDIT: 700 posts! Woooooo!
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Alrighty,
  • I added color to the skills, runes, spells, and items. (Maybe too much, but whatevs. :>)
  • Merged the suggested sections as you recommended.
  • Concerning the Gameplay section, I really can't think of anything else T.T;;
    (Maybe it's because I haven't slept yet and it's like 9AM where I live.... I'll try to add more.)

If you have any ideas for my Gameplay section please don't hesitate to tell me. <3

Thanks in advance.

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jhoijhoi wrote:

@orochinagi: If I haven't +1'd your guide yet, I'll do so now. Such a respectful and well-thought out reply! You clearly know Blitz - but there had to be a reason why my review wasn't glowing. I'll go check it out now, to see if there is any more criticism I can add.

EDIT EDIT EDIT: 700 posts! Woooooo!


If you took your time to read and provide constructive criticism, the least I could do was reply back with detailed info to your questions/comments. As I said, objective was to improve the guide and you helped me do so and thus deserve attention. I believe that any and all questions to guides should be addressed.

Grats for the 700 posts and thanks for the review and the +1 :)
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jhoijhoi wrote:

10) I'm Australian, so this offends me, "Now oim gonna jam my thumb up 'is bu'ole!"

But it's soooo funneh D:

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11) As PsiGuard said, those ionian boots should be swapped out for Merc's or Zerk's.

Why? CDR is great on Renekton. I'd only grab Merc if the enemy team is really CC heavy. Zerk can't even compare to the other 2 imo..
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@Searz: He caps 40% cooldown - the boots contribute only 1% before sending it over 40%, so the boots are kinda useless ^^

@Bryun: Will have a look, gimme a sec. EDIT: Wow o.O It's AMAZING what a little colour will do. *has a strong desire to just steal your formatting because it's so much prettier than mine =.=*

@Orochi: I changed my verdict a little earlier, so if anyone does read through them, they'll see a positive review from my end ^^ Oh, also, I think I was a little put off at your ending, because there really wasn't a conclusion (trying to make excuses as to why I didn't rate you highly - unless you had changed the guide after I reviewed it).
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+rep to all on this page!!!

"ERROR: You cannot REP yourself"

Aw, disappoint.
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jhoijhoi wrote:

@Searz: He caps 40% cooldown - the boots contribute only 1% before sending it over 40%, so the boots are kinda useless ^^

You gettin' confuzzled?
Youmuu's Ghostblade+ Spirit Visage+ Ionian Boots of Lucidity=exactly 40%CDR

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jhoijhoi wrote:

@Orochi: I changed my verdict a little earlier, so if anyone does read through them, they'll see a positive review from my end ^^ Oh, also, I think I was a little put off at your ending, because there really wasn't a conclusion (trying to make excuses as to why I didn't rate you highly - unless you had changed the guide after I reviewed it).


Kinda lost on what you mean by "a little put off at your ending, because there really wasn't a conclusion"

And I overhauled some parts of the formatting on the guide a while after replying to your review. The overhaul is still a work in progress but since i'm at work I can't do it in one go xD
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@Orochi: It's 1:30am, lol :P I might be a bit off in my observations right now. I'll read over your guide again soon. Holla in this thread again after you finish your rehaul and I'll give you some more criticism (if there is any to give ^^)

@Searz: Cooldown runes, bru!
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Greater Glyph of Cooldown Reduction, Spirit Visage, and Youmuu's Ghostblade plus Sorcery bring you to 39% CDR. That means that your Ionian Boots of Lucidity only contribute 1% CDR by endgame.
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@Searz: Cooldown runes, bru!

Someone can't do math XD
15+10+5.85=30.85%CDR
I'd remove the CDR glyphs and go for those items instead, to reach 40%.
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