Adonikam's Cruel Review Thread

[quote=Adonikam][center][h1]Adonikam's Cruel Review Thread[/h1][/center] [center]~~~~~~~~~~[/center] If you're interested in getting my opinion on your guide, build or sex life then you've come to the right place. After reading through [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/build-and-guide-discussion/will-review-for-food-i-will-read-your-guide-6053]Jhoijhoi's Review Thread[/url] I've decided it'll be a good idea to have some prerequisites when applying for a review. These are listed below; [b]1.[/b] Post count over 150 or 10 or more rep. [b]2.[/b] Author must be summoner level 30 (NO EXCEPTIONS). [b]3.[/b] You must have read this guide: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506]How to make a guide[/url] [b]4.[/b] There must be [u]NO[/u] snowball items in your guide. Now you must be wondering, why should you let me review your guide? [list] I have played 2200+ games of LoL I'm 1550+ elo I own 76 out of 85 champs I own a HEAP of runes [/list] PS: If I do downvote your guide it just means fix it up and get back to me and I'll review my review :) [center]~~~~~~~~~~[/center] [center][img=http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/1955/notowned2.png] [i]These are the champions I do not own so please keep that in mind when asking for a review.[/i][/center][/quote]

[quote=Adonikam][b]1st review[/b] - [url=http://www.mobafire.com/profile/phoenix0000ff-136828]Phoenix0000ff[/url] Jungle Twitch guide [color=#0080ff][b]PROS[/b][/color] - It's actually a well written and detailed guide, quite funny actually :P [color=#ff0000][b]CONS[/b][/color] - Runes are messy (attack speed glyphs?), it's jungle twitch ffs [b]Improvements[/b] - You're taking a champion who can counter jungle SO HARD and forcing the poor bastard to jungle! With a few modifications I would actually upvote this. Add a laning section (Second build) and add a counter-jungling section and you've got your self an amazing guide buddy. [b]My vote[/b] - N/A [b]2nd review[/b] - [url=http://www.mobafire.com/profile/khazem-99784]Khazem[/url] Tank Nasus Build [color=#0080ff][b]PROS[/b][/color] - Runes, masteries and the actual guide itself is well done. Teleport gank section is GREAT I can't stress how much people misuse Teleport! [color=#ff0000][b]CONS[/b][/color] - I'm not a fan of the skilling order (I like to max E but not sure if that's viable anymore), you have some weird item builds which aren't that great. [b]Improvements[/b] - Jungling section (Lifesteal buff made it more viable) Better item builds. I don't think Shurelya's is good for a Nasus with Randuin's. It's also a less well presented version of Jhoijhoi's guide so if I were you I'd take ideas from her guide (pictures, video's etc) [b]My vote[/b] - N/A [b]3rd review[/b] - [url=http://www.mobafire.com/profile/beeswarm17-77971]Beeswarm17[/url] Riven Guide [color=#0080ff][b]PROS[/b][/color] - Jungling and Laning nice. Solid item choices [color=#ff0000][b]CONS[/b][/color] - Pretty standard, nothing special? [b]Improvements[/b] - Level 2 ganking section? (Get leash on golems and then grab stun level 2, gank adjoining lane) add a tips and tricks section! [b]My vote[/b] - +1 [b]4th review[/b] - [url=http://www.mobafire.com/profile/kazega-77928]Kazega[/url] Katarina Guide [color=#0080ff][b]PROS[/b][/color] - Information is neatly presented, has some good use of Kat pictures throughout the guide, you include dominion builds. [color=#ff0000][b]CONS[/b][/color] - Ghost?? Skilling order is weird (taking 2 in W but maxing it last? o.0), problem with your runes. Mejai's? [b]Improvements[/b] - Flash/Ignite is the only viable set up I think works on Katarina, read up on Searz' rune guide ie. Dodge runes are only good when you take the dodge mastery!! (I do like the idea of move speed quints though, very interesting). DON'T PUT MEJAI'S IN THE MAIN BUILD (at the top). No offence but seeing that there lets me know you are inexperienced. [b]My vote[/b] - N/A (I was close to upvoting it just has too many problems atm) [b]5th review[/b] - [url=http://www.mobafire.com/profile/ssyrak-57937]Ssyrak[/url] Leona Guide [color=#0080ff][b]PROS[/b][/color] - I was impressed by this guide and that's saying a lot. [color=#ff0000][b]CONS[/b][/color] - You suggest way too many items that suck on her. No CV. [b]Improvements[/b] - Leona only has damage early game so you utilize this by taking the role of damaging support bot lane (kinda like an Alistair) so you need CV, teleport is good only on top solo because he'll be a higher level then the other lanes so his ganks will be SUCCESSFUL. Don't suggest bad items!! Trinity is GOOD on Leona (it's what I build) but don't get Spirit Visage! [b]My vote[/b] - +1 [b]6th review[/b] - [url=http://www.mobafire.com/profile/sirspankalot-104752]SirSpankAlot[/url] Skarner Jungle Guide [color=#0080ff][b]PROS[/b][/color] - Items, runes, masteries, spells all good [color=#ff0000][b]CONS[/b][/color] - Kinda... boring. Nothing to catch my eye. [b]Improvements[/b] - Make your own jungle video and commentate it, saying good times along the route when you can gank etc. Guide definitely needs some more appeal somewhere. Tips and Tricks section (like flash then ult or something) [b]My vote[/b] - N/A [b]7th review[/b] - [url=http://www.mobafire.com/profile/zioserpe-108190]ZioSerpe[/url] Poppy Guide [color=#0080ff][b]PROS[/b][/color] - ..... [color=#ff0000][b]CONS[/b][/color] - It's a wall of text man. [b]Improvements[/b] - FIX spelling errors, grammar and the wall of text. Seriously, make it look presentable. [b]My vote[/b] - I'll wait. [b]8th review[/b] - [url=http://www.mobafire.com/profile/marisi-84636]Marisi[/url] Nocturne Guide [color=#0080ff][b]PROS[/b][/color] - ..... [color=#ff0000][b]CONS[/b][/color] - CAPITAL LETTERS MAN. Omg your builds are bad. You suggest Clarity?? [b]Improvements[/b] - I'm assuming English isn't your first language so find someone who can write it and get them to proof-read your guide. The whole guide is just bad. You even ruined the Atmog's build with PD and BT -.- [b]My vote[/b] - -1, fix it up an get back to me [b]9th review[/b] - [url=http://www.mobafire.com/profile/bryun-65324]Bryun[/url] Akali Guide [color=#0080ff][b]PROS[/b][/color] - Wow very nice guide [color=#ff0000][b]CONS[/b][/color] - I don't like 21 in offense personally. [b]Improvements[/b] - N/A xD [b]My vote[/b] - +1, rec'd [b]10th review[/b] - [url=http://www.mobafire.com/profile/rudmed-27290]Rudmed[/url] TF guide [color=#0080ff][b]PROS[/b][/color] - Nice teleport range picture (good idea), well written, well presented, good AP build [color=#ff0000][b]CONS[/b][/color] - Your AD build sucks [b]Improvements[/b] - I don't like how people make AD builds and put in every BF item because it's #1. [b]My vote[/b] - +1[/quote]

[quote=Khazem]Hey, not sure if there's some format we're supposed to use that I'm missing but I'd like to request a review for my Nasus guide. It had been at 83% for quite a while untill it suddenly started getting alot of downvotes and noone has been leaving comments as to why they were downvoting. Literally not a single person who has downvoted the guide so far has left a comment. I really want to figure out what is causing this many people to straight up downvote it so any feedback at all would be very helpful. link to the guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/nasus-whys-this-tank-hitting-me-for-half-my-health-107987[/quote]

[quote=Beeswarm17]I'd like to have my guide looked at, as well. Feedback would be most appreciated. My guide might be receiving a major overhaul soon, and I'd like to get all the comments and criticism out of the way before I make any major modifications. If you could help me by critiquing my guide, I'd be most appreciative. Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/riven-valor-for-all-127052]My guide[/url][/quote]

[quote=Adonikam]Just finished Khazems guide I'm havin a break before I do Beeswarms![/quote]

[quote=Kazega]this is my first guide. I love it I am constantly looking at it and it has a lot of helpful information to any new Katarina player. I would appreciate a honest review. I would like a Vet Recomendation as well but that will come with time. I do have ideas to improve on it: namely throwing in some pictures in clever positions. guide link:[url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/katarina-playing-with-knives-113135]Katarina: Playing with Knives[/url][/quote]

[quote=Nighthawk]lol wtf is with all the review threads now? regardless, i'll send you a request.[/quote]

[quote=Ssyrak]I'd like to have a review on my guide to Leona. She is one of my favourite champions and I tried to write an in-depth guide for her. Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/daughter-of-amun-ra-an-indepth-guide-to-leona-101449 Thanks in advance.[/quote]

[quote=Lugignaf]Dat instant sticky. Wonder who did it this time... SCRAX![/quote]

[quote=Beeswarm17]Thanks, Adonikam! I'll see what I can do about getting special section for an early gank. I had also thought about a separate tips and tricks section, but I tied it with the skills. I think I could probably move all of my pointers into their own section. I'll see how some new formatting goes. And I think you're right about it being fairly standard without really being special. I've managed to get a video capture program that works, I think, so I should be able to add my own videos to hopefully give it a little more... I dunno. Something. It needs some... polish?... life?... yeah, I'm not sure what word describes it. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! It's greatly appreciated. :)[/quote]