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June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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I Will Review Your Guide
Welcome to my Review Thread. Previously I have +scouted guides with this shop, but this time around I'm just going to read your guide and give you a few suggestions towards improvement. Nothing huge, just short and sweet. This is your chance to get a discussion going about your guide. As we discuss your guide and you implement changes, I'll come back and drop a few more ideas or hints - just @mention me to grab my attention.

The Rules I Expect You To Follow
1/ Read Making a Guide.
2/ Use the template below to request a review.
3/ Reply to my review on your guide to start our discussion.

Review Request Template (Copy & Paste)
1/ Name: [example, jhoijhoi]
2/ Link: [paste the URL to your guide here]
3/ Notes: [any information you want me to know, or anything in particular you want me to look for or discuss with you]


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A Little About Me - jhoijhoi
I'm jhoijhoi on the Oceanic (OCE) server. I was Plat 4 in Season 6. I do not claim to be an expert player at all. But I DO know what readers want and I can deliver advice regarding the readability of your guide. The discussion I hope to start with you will prompt you to change small things about your guide. You lead the discussion where you want it to go, and I'll be your sounding board. If this sounds like something you're interested in, feel free to request a review to start up our discussion.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Xaioli » June 29, 2011 5:48pm | Report
Guide For: Me.
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To see for flaws/criticism
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything? 0.o
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/nidalee-the-way-of-the-spear-56014


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Guide For: Me.
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To see for flaws/criticism
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything? 0.o
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/amumu-wrapping-up-the-jungle-37186
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>carries harder than xaioli
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Lugignaf » June 29, 2011 5:51pm | Report
I find it funny that the "pros" of the site are asking for criticism.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Scrax » June 29, 2011 5:52pm | Report
Any criticism is good criticism, Lugignaf :)
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Jebus McAzn » June 29, 2011 5:53pm | Report
Lugignaf wrote:

I find it funny that the "pros" of the site are asking for criticism.

gotta start somewhere right
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Bryun » June 29, 2011 6:02pm | Report
Lugignaf wrote:

I find it funny that the "pros" of the site are asking for criticism.


Pro doesn't mean perfect.

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Bryun » June 29, 2011 6:06pm | Report
Guide For: Akali & Jax
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I like opinions & criticism.
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you can find.
Guide Link: Akali | Jax

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