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June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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Welcome to my Review Thread. I opened this shop a long time ago; over a year has passed since the first post here. I closed the shop due to university commitments, but I can work weekends. So request reviews while you have a chance! Huge thanks to IceCreamy for the template of the score board!

Rules:


1) When requesting, use the template.
2) Read my Making a Guide guide. Read it, or no review.
3) Run your guide through a spell check. If I find excessive spelling errors, I will dock points off your score.
4) Reply to my review via this thread. No reply, no vote/scout.

Template for Review Request


Name: [example, jhoijhoi]
Link: [paste the URL to your guide here]
Did you read my Guide to Making a Guide just now? YES / NO*
Have you run your guide through a spell check? YES / NO*

*An answer of NO immediately discounts your guide for review.

How this works:


1] I will read your guide. As I read, I will be writing down my initial thoughts as feedback for you to utilise.
2) I'll then grade you based on:
Readability (3) || Content (3) || Viability (4)

<4 = Downvote || 6> = Upvote || 9> = Scout Point

3) I'll link the review here, and post your score.

What I want in return:


0) READ my Making a Guide Guide; use some coding templates! Really, my Coding Guide can help you, read it!
1) A reply to my review - you do not get a vote until you reply. Please reply in this thread, as I cannot keep track of all my reviews, my recent activity only goes so far.
2) Anything else you'd like to give me. A return review on one of my own guides, a huge thank you, +rep, chocolate... you could write me a poem? 8D

Disclaimer of Services: an FYI


I'm jhoijhoi on the NA and Oceanic server, Elophant me and you'll see my stats. In Season 3, my highest elo was Gold 4. I do not claim to be an expert in every champion, or every role. But I DO know what readers want and I can deliver advice regarding the readability of your guide. If I do end up criticising your build, it will be by asking questions for clarity. I recommend answering each of my questions to your fullest extent in order to utilise the content within your guide. If I have to ask, a new summoner would too.

READABILITY
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what is readability?
CONTENT
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What is content?
VIABILITY
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what is viability?
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NAME
jhoijhoi
utopus
Emikadon
CHAMPION
Pikachu Guide
SR Support Morgana
SR Support Morgana
RATING
9001/10
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7/10
DATE
12/09/2014
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14/09/14


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Orange = Scouted
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Xaioli » June 29, 2011 5:48pm | Report
Guide For: Me.
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To see for flaws/criticism
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything? 0.o
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/nidalee-the-way-of-the-spear-56014


"Love is a luxury that I can't afford."
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Guide For: Me.
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To see for flaws/criticism
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything? 0.o
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/amumu-wrapping-up-the-jungle-37186
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>carries harder than xaioli
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Lugignaf » June 29, 2011 5:51pm | Report
I find it funny that the "pros" of the site are asking for criticism.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Scrax » June 29, 2011 5:52pm | Report
Any criticism is good criticism, Lugignaf :)
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Lugignaf wrote:

I find it funny that the "pros" of the site are asking for criticism.

gotta start somewhere right
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Bryun » June 29, 2011 6:02pm | Report
Lugignaf wrote:

I find it funny that the "pros" of the site are asking for criticism.


Pro doesn't mean perfect.

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Bryun » June 29, 2011 6:06pm | Report
Guide For: Akali & Jax
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I like opinions & criticism.
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you can find.
Guide Link: Akali | Jax

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