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[quote=astrolia]I'm ESL too so it's p hard for me to explain. > "if you have another AP on the team that gets a lot of help from SV a great example would be ryze" "a great example would be ryze" doesn't belong on the end of that sentence w/o some kind of punctuation: "(a great example would be Ryze)" ", such as Ryze," I would also say the construction "[x] gets a lot of help from [y]" is more natural for 2 nouns/pronouns rather than concepts. > "The reason i'm not too fond of this item is that your usefulness without your ulty isn't really that useful" "your usefulness [...] isn't really that useful" is not A Thing. You can just say "you aren't useful w/o ult".[/quote]

[quote=MrOganad]Good evening. Please review my guide if u can. http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/lee-sin-taking-care-of-the-jungle-278033 Thank you for your time.[/quote]

[quote=koridjinn]Since [[diana]] is an AP caster, I thought you might have some idea on how she would work with different items - even if it is for a jungler. Link to the guide: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/dominate-with-diana-jungle-guide-253160]Here[/url] Summoner name: Cloverdose Anything special I should know: I haven't been able to play much PvP as of late because of my computer crashing every so often. Also, should I include a "What to Replace" section so my readers have more options? Thanks Astrolia! I'M A BIG FAN.[/quote]

[quote=astrolia]I will try to review both of your guides, but I probably won't have any intelligent-sounding feedback about jungling lol.[/quote]

[quote=Pølsemanden]Sorry for "double-teaming" on you, i don't remember where i heard it. I think it was in one of the patch-preview videos. The post you linked is really old(back when dodge was a thing, old).[/quote]

[quote=DemonSovereign]Can you review my guide? It's for mid lane~ [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/dark-metallica-rocking-with-mordekaiser-280706]Click me[/url] Summoner name: Demonic Ares on NA[/quote]

[quote=GrandmasterD]As a platinum AD Carry and support main I'd like you to take a look at my [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/grandmistressds-draven-hear-that-deaths-knocking-259761]Draven guide[/url] and see how it can be improved. Summoner name: GrandmistressD @ EUW Notes: I want to keep my guide short, simple and clear. Hence, I'll not be adding extended chapters about warding, etc.[/quote]

[quote=astrolia]GMD's is last request I'll be taking for a while. Will be catching up on reviews over winter break here. o/[/quote]

[quote=GrandmasterD][quote=astrolia] GMD's is last request I'll be taking for a while. Will be catching up on reviews over winter break here. o/ [/quote] [b]the[/b] last request*[/quote]

[quote=astrolia]I'M AN ESL ASIAN LEAVE ME ALONE. >:[[/quote]