Glacius, Guardian of the Void

[quote=Glayde][h1][color=#0080ff]Glacius, Guardian of the Void[/color][/h1] (pronounced GLAY-shus or GLAY-cee-ehs) Role: AP Carry, Solotop, Support, Melee [color=#00ff00]"Everything goes in, NOTHING comes out."[/color] BIO Again, too lazy to write so: Glacius = Galio's brother, Galio defends Demacia (I think), and Glacius defends the void :) [h2]ABILITIES[/h2] [b]Passive:[/b] [color=#800080]Mark of the Void[/color] After casting a spell, Glacius' next autoattack deals 20+(5 x current level) bonus damage over 3 seconds. (Mark last for 5 seconds) Note: Think of Lux's passive. [b]Q:[/b] Concussive Bolt Glacius fires a bolt of void energy, stunning the first enemy it hits for 1.5 seconds and dealing 60/95/130/165/200 (+60% of AP) damage. Type: Skillshot (Range = 1150) Manacost: 60/70/80/90/100 Cooldown: 15/14/13/12/11 [b]W:[/b] [color=#ff0000]________[/color] Glacius creates a ______, slowing enemies by 35% and increasing allies movement speed by 30%. Type: AoE, (range = 800, AoE of ___ = 400) Manacost: 45/60/75/90/105 Cooldown: 9/9/9/9/9 Note: I dunno what to name this spell, it's simialr to [[Morgana]]'s [[Tormented Soil]], but with a different effect. [b]E:[/b] [color=#0080ff]Void Blast[/color] Glacius launches a ball of void matter dealing 70/110/150/190/230 (+50% of AP) damage. Type: Single Target (750 AoE) Manacost: 65/75/85/95/105 Cooldown: 12/11/10/9/8 [b]R:[/b] [color=#00ffff]Ravage of Time[/color] Glacius call upon the Void, opening to portal on his chest, and pulls all enemies in a 900 AoE toward him for 2 seconds and dealing 250/350/450 (+70% of AP) damage. (Kind of like [url=http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/skill/black-hole-52]Enigma's Black Hole[/url]) Type: AoE around Glacius Cooldown: 180/160/140 Manacost: 150/200/250 Recommended Build: [[Doran's Ring]], [[Sorcerer's Shoes]], [[Rod of Ages]], [[Athene's Holy Grail]], [[Banshee's Veil]], [[Rabadon's Deathcap]] Sorry for making two threads, but I think these are some pretty good concepts. :D Feel free to leave a comment below. Constructive criticism is accepted. Thanks for reading! -Glayde[/quote]

[quote=Baker5]It sounds like a few of your abilities are inspired by Lux's/complemented by a little bit of Veigar. Overall, I think that the ability kit is somewhat abstract and a little bland. Lux and Morgana both have skillshot stuns. Mana costs are a bit high, forcing the champion to build a Tear of The Goddess or (more likely) an Archangel's Staff. The R. The idea seems to kind of stem from Malzahar's R as well, but to multiple targets... This would probably lead to a nerf to Glacius' ultimate (if his idea were to come to the game), most likely making it to where it would be more like Nunu's ultimate to where escape is still possible. The amount of CC in that ultimate would be insane, DRASTICALLY changing the outcome of a teamfight. The names of the abilities are fresh, but a little too centered towards one idea (the void). Maybe change them up a little, get more creative. I would definitely like to see a possible skin for Glacius in the near future to support this thread. Good idea, but lacks some thought. Not bad for no edit yet, though. Keep thinking, you're not doing bad at all. :)[/quote]

[quote=Glayde]Thanks for the feedback! I'll take a look at all the skills again, I'll see what I can change up and stuff. Expect some changes soon :P[/quote]

[quote=TheKut]I like it, but you should add if it's physical or magigic damage[/quote]

[quote=Le Pro of d00m]1Seems good, but even tho the Q has a high CD... 1.5 sec stun + 200 magic +(60% of ap)... just seems like it would be a little to over the top when you already have an AOE slow and pull. replacing the stun with a silence would be more practical. Good job though! EDIT: i also forgot to mention the range, 1150 ( i think thats what it was) is pretty high for a cc+damage skill.[/quote]

[quote=devdevil]His passive is basically like Lux's [[Illumination]] Q sounds very similar to Morgana's [[Dark Binding]] His W sounds exactly like Orianna's [[Command: Dissonance]]... And E sounds like Veigar's [[Baleful Strike]]. If you were basing his abilities on other champions, you should base the stats off of the champions as well. Anyway, nice champion idea![/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi]^By [[baleful strike]] you mean [[dark matter]], right? 8D[/quote]

[quote=devdevil]Sure :P[/quote]