Icuonuez Will Review Your Guide!

I got a Re-Review on My Shyvana guide and a couple other ones to be


Summoner Level 30

Guide:Shyvana; Shadow of the Dragon
Reason: A Re-Review, the first FTP Shyvana week is fast approaching and I want the guide to be as good as it can be

Guide:Katarina: Playing with Knives
Reason: It's my baby (so to speak) I want it to be the best it can be. I will be doing some Reformation pretty soon though.

Guide:Buildign Your own way
Reason: I feel EVERYONE should Reed this guide I am trying to get good marks for it to raise its visiblity. I know it's wall-of-text-ish I just am at a block as to how to fix it.

Votes- If you feel they earn them then yes please

Guides: Fedturne - Nightmare in the Jungle and Fednekton - Interior Crocodile Alligator
Guide Link - In my signature (click the guide names)
Summoner Level - 30
Review Because - Wanting more feedback
Vote - Yes

I will get to your guide reviews immediately. Thanks for posting!

Keep up the good work! We need more reviewers on MobaFire :)

JhoiJhoi: It's no problem, really. Do you guys need help with your reviews? If this dies out, I don't think I'll make another one, so I'll be free for whatever. I know you get A LOT of review requests.

Guide Link - http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/make-em-go-nocturne-is-op-riot-should-nerf-him-105574
Summoner Level - 30
Review Because - I need some more feedback because there still is a lot of space to improve.
Vote - Yes, if you think it deserves it.

*edit*
I have fixed the spell section. I realized Clarity isn't a very good choice, I already tried to explain that, but according to you I should emphasize that more. So I moved it to the "bad spell" section. And the part about Revive was simply just a joke.

You also critised the fact that I use a 21/0/9 mastery build in my jungling build. I was thinking of making the changes you suggested, but I decided not to because I never have any troubles jungling with Nocturne. My masteries allow me to clear the jungle faster and gives me an advantage in xp. You also critize my decision to pick Brute Force over Sorcery . Here you contradict your earlier comment about taking Hardiness and Resistance , since Brute Force makes my early jungle saver. Sorcery doesn't. So in a nutshell, I'm really sorry but I refuse to change my masteries because I and most other Nocturne players use these masteries. Please don't see this as an insult to you but I like my masteries the way they are.

I agree that my item section is a bit messy but part of the cause is that I try to include both 3v3 and 5v5 builds. But you misunderstood my preference. I heavily favor off-tank Nocturne over glass cannon. Actually I despise glass cannon Nocturne. The first(glass cannon) builds are for 3v3. I did explain now why I prefer Phantom Dancer over Youmuu's Ghostblade.

Next you commented on the lack of a warding section in my guide, of which I am painfully aware of. I have implanted your suggestion, although temporarily. I am working on it. Thanks a lot for pointing it out. I have credited you for this improvement. And the maker of course.

Also thanks for the idea to implant the pros and cons side by side. The guide looks a bit better now. I also have made some changes in the formatting. But I still have a long way to go. It would help a lot if you could point out a more specific or concrete problem, so it's easier to solve. But that's not necessary, I'll leave that for the next reviewer :P

Please don't think I'm ungrateful because of the first few paragraphs. I really appreciate what you did and the time you took to review my guide. Sorry if I sounded a bit hostile, but I wanted to explain why I did this and that. I'm sorry for this wall of text but I really hope you could reconsider my guide.

Guide Link - http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/carry-me-morde-108278
Summoner Level - 30
Review Because - Feedback is always welcomed.
Vote - Yes

There is a reason I haven't made it a very in-depth guide. I already explained it to jhoi and in the inroduction. I try to keep my guide short and sweet.
The reason we all make guides on this site is because we want to help other people. The pros don't need to look up a guide. Most guides are checked out when there is a new rotation and people are eager to try out a new champ. Most people will just click of the guide with the highest score and quickly read through the important parts. I want to help these people(since I'm one of the more noob players :P). I want my guide to be especially helpful for people who are new and need help instead for the pros. I might or I will turn my guide into an in-depth guide later.

When I play Kat: or LoL in general I am often Duo Queuing with a friend I have played with since Day 1 it seems like. so My Katarina Build is heavily inspired by the teamwork that came from that. so a lot of things will be different than what you would normally see.

I posted an extended response on the guide

Guide Link - http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shyvana-jungling-and-solo-drakes-145666

Summoner Level - 30

Review Because - I'd like more publicity and pointers. And not just at the build, the masteries, the runes. But the lay-out, the use of literature, the way of explaining things. I always feel like I'm very repetetive and I'd like to know an insider view. Am I repetetive in my explanations? I'd really like that one thing for you to focus on the most.

Vote - Yes

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Thanks in advance!

PS: I'm not at the current 80 post count yet. But I joined a few days ago, and I didn't feel like spamming useless things to just get post counts. I'm working on becoming more active, of course.