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Lazukin
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I believe you missed this one in your list.
Hey, jhoijhoi! I'd love it if you checked out my Lux guide in my sig. Many many many people aren't a fan of the build, but it works well for me and others who use it so works for me lol.
I've left a comment on your Ashe guide a veeeeery long time ago :P
Summoner level: 30
Post count:850
Spell check: YES
Guide for: Lux
Why I'd like this reviewed: I worked on it for a very long time, and it didn't really get any attention unlike my previous Galio guide which I took down. I'd love some feedback.
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you think could use improvement, although I'd mostly like to add some new sections.
Although I do have 3 cheat sheets, just use the first one if you want. Thanks!
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Hey, jhoijhoi! I'd love it if you checked out my Lux guide in my sig. Many many many people aren't a fan of the build, but it works well for me and others who use it so works for me lol.
I've left a comment on your Ashe guide a veeeeery long time ago :P
Summoner level: 30
Post count:850
Spell check: YES
Guide for: Lux
Why I'd like this reviewed: I worked on it for a very long time, and it didn't really get any attention unlike my previous Galio guide which I took down. I'd love some feedback.
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you think could use improvement, although I'd mostly like to add some new sections.
Although I do have 3 cheat sheets, just use the first one if you want. Thanks!
I make sigs, PM me if you want one :D (Thanks for the Nidalee sig, The_Nameless_Bard!)
I am going to repost my application, because my guide name changed.
Summoner level: 30
Post count: My profile says 101.
Spell check: No, but I think my English is good enough.
Guide for: Lux
Why I'd like this reviewed: I recently made some big updates, and I can't help but wonder what other people think of it ^^
What I'd like you to focus on: The usage of colors, and the 2 mega sections that took me hours to write; yes the really big list of champions.
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/luxurious-lasergaming-113843
Thanks already ^^
Creamy. :)
Summoner level: 30
Post count: My profile says 101.
Spell check: No, but I think my English is good enough.
Guide for: Lux
Why I'd like this reviewed: I recently made some big updates, and I can't help but wonder what other people think of it ^^
What I'd like you to focus on: The usage of colors, and the 2 mega sections that took me hours to write; yes the really big list of champions.
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/luxurious-lasergaming-113843
Thanks already ^^
Creamy. :)
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Too hot to be icecream.
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Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
TigerJesus
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Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 17 =/ (you did promise to help me write a guide tho!)
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Xerath
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It's my first guide and i'd like feedback/ constructive criticisms. I put a lot of effort into it and i think its a lot more in-depth than all the other xerath guides i've seen so far.
What I'd like you to focus on: anything really. i know the formatting could use work. I like to think of myself as being pretty articulate so i think the writing is good, though perhaps a little lengthy at times.
Guide Link: Right Hurr
Post Count (at time of request): 17 =/ (you did promise to help me write a guide tho!)
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Xerath
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It's my first guide and i'd like feedback/ constructive criticisms. I put a lot of effort into it and i think its a lot more in-depth than all the other xerath guides i've seen so far.
What I'd like you to focus on: anything really. i know the formatting could use work. I like to think of myself as being pretty articulate so i think the writing is good, though perhaps a little lengthy at times.
Guide Link: Right Hurr
A Xerath Guide with personality!
Credit to graff pirate for the pic and Alexanpt for making the sig ^^
Credit to graff pirate for the pic and Alexanpt for making the sig ^^
Summoner level: 30
Post count:~3200-3400
Spell check: Done
Guide For: Xerath
Why I'd like it to be reviewed: My first real attempt at making a guide. This is 95-99% completion. I need opinions of what more might need to be added or refined.
Suggested Focus: Primarily the layout. If some things need to be changed or fixed. The information in the guide is important, but I simply need to know if my explanations are UNDERSTANDABLE. Suggested phrasing is alright, but the focus is on being able to understand my explanations.
Link:Power of Positioning
Post count:~3200-3400
Spell check: Done
Guide For: Xerath
Why I'd like it to be reviewed: My first real attempt at making a guide. This is 95-99% completion. I need opinions of what more might need to be added or refined.
Suggested Focus: Primarily the layout. If some things need to be changed or fixed. The information in the guide is important, but I simply need to know if my explanations are UNDERSTANDABLE. Suggested phrasing is alright, but the focus is on being able to understand my explanations.
Link:Power of Positioning
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Post Count (at time of request): 100 :D
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Brand
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: This is currently my best guide, and I put a lot of effort in it. I'd like this reviewed due to that I'd like to know how informative it is, and if it works out well. Therefore, if it could be reviewed by a professional, It'd be magnificent.
What I'd like you to focus on: Generally the whole guide in one. Also, I'd like you to focus some on how I've described the different things, how I've written about e.g. runes, playstyle etc.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/brand-hextech-fireballz-in-depth-131723
This would be very very much appreciated, thank you very much in advance!!
I have dropped a comment on your Ashe guide a while ago, as it was the one I followed from the start <3
Also, if you wonder why there are three builds in the cheat sheet, it's because people wanna play Brand differently. Some people HATE Tear of the Goddess, while others like me love it. Others want a bunch more surviability etc. Therefore I have explained what the different builds are and which one fits for the reader. :)