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[quote=th3BlackAngel]Summoner Level: 30 Post Count: 426 Spell Check: yes Guide for: [[Nidalee]] Why I'd like this to be reviewed: Remade it and re-released it. Archived the old one. What I'd like you to focus on: Everything, but if you could give some special attention to the playstyle section. [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/nidalee-olympic-gold-medalist-javelin-toss-129318]Nidalee-Olympic Gold Medalist (Javelin Toss)[/url][/quote]

[quote=Khazem]Summoner Level: 30 Post Count: 120 Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes Guide For: General guide for solo'ing top Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I feel it's still very incomplete and lacking a bit. I'm looking for some good suggestions/feedback as to what I can add to the guide and maybe things I can expand on. What I'd like you to focus on: The content of the guide, I kinda have the feeling I overlooked a bunch of stuff. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-solo-top-lane-and-you-all-you-need-to-know-132124[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi]OMFG I AM FUCKING BEHIND LIST IS SO DAUNTING JESUS CHRIST HOLY SHIT WOW THE LIST IS SO HUGE OMFG WOW JUST OMFG ------- [center][b][color=#0080ff]!!! University > Reviewing !!![/color][/b][/center] ------------------- [indent][color=#008000][b]REQUIREMENTS:[/b][/color] [color=#008000]- [/color]Author must have +100 Posts [color=#008000]- [/color]Guide must have been run through a spell and grammar check [color=#008000]- [/color]Author must be over Summoner Level 25 [color=#008000]- [/color]Author must comment on my [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ashes-to-ashes-67331]Ashe guide[/url] with their opinion.[/indent] If you are LUCKY, your guide will be reviewed by other members, such as: [color=#00ff00]Searz[/color], da_Neo, Rudmed, Bloofyre, Bryun, and Nighthawk. They drop in from time to time to help with my workload. <3 You[color=#ff0000] must[/color] use this format below for submitting a guide for review, otherwise I'll [color=#ff0000]ignore[/color] your request. People who just drop their links here will be [color=#ff0000]completely ignored[/color]. [indent][color=#0080ff][b]Summoner Level: Post Count (at time of request): Spell & Grammar check completed: YES/NO Guide For (champion): Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: What I'd like you to focus on: Guide Link: [/b][/color][/indent] What do I expect in return? Read/vote on my [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ashes-to-ashes-67331][b][color=#0080ff]>> Complete & Comprehensive Compiled Catalogue of Ashe Knowledge <<[/color][/b][/url], [color=#ff0080]+rep[/color] me, and a simple [color=#ff0000]thank you[/color] would be lovely ^^ [indent][color=#ff8000][b]OTHER RULES/NOTES:[/b][/color] [color=#ff8000]-[/color] Please only submit [color=#008000]one guide per request[/color]. [color=#ff8000]- [/color]Please do not request a review on a champion who has not been released. I would also prefer to read only guides published on MobaFire. [color=#ff8000]-[/color] If you are [color=#ff0000]rude[/color] to me in your response to my review, I will consider [color=#ff0000]not featuring you[/color] in the below post. [color=#ff8000]-[/color] If I read your guide. And you have not read the links I have supplied in this post. I will literally asplode. And you will be charged with my death. [/indent] ----------------------------- [center][color=#ff0000][b]Common Things I Repeat In Most Of My Reviews[/b][/color][/center] ------------------------------------------ [indent][list] [*] ONE BUILD. Show me one build, the one you use 90% of the time, in your cheat sheet. NO NEED, EVER, to display more than one cheat sheet. All alternative items can be explained in your Situational/Alternative Items section. [*] Good Hands IS FUCKING BETTER THAN PERSEVERANCE. Jesus Christ. [*] Colour is good. Too much colour is bad. Find the correct balance. [*] Paragraphical space. Walls of text = bad. Sparse text = bad. Find the correct balance. [/list][/indent] ------------------------------------------ [center][color=#008000][b]Reviewable Guides[/b][/color][/center] [quote=ShadowNet] Summoner Level:30 Post Count (at time of request):274 Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes Guide For (champion): Mordekaiser Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To make it perfect. 3rd time I'm submitting, feels like going to a doctor. What I'd like you to focus on: Everything, by everything I mean everything. Make 30 points instead of 10 so I would submit less. :d Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/carry-me-morde-108278 [/quote] [quote=NicknameMy] Summoner Level: 30 Post Count (at time of request):564 Spell & Grammar check completed: Not really, i cannot do it^^. Google Translate sucks... Guide For (champion): [[Master Yi]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Re-Review, I changed many things around. It is now more a general Yi guide with the focus at "Final" Yi. What I'd like you to focus on: The changed things. Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/quot-final-quot-yi-king-of-jungle-more-general-yi-guide-104375]"Final" Yi, King of Jungle[/url] [/quote] [quote=ZioSerpe]Summoner Level:30 Post Count:103 Spell & Grammar check completed: YES Guide For: [[Poppy]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: having some major gaming opinion on my unique build What I'd like you to focus on: gameplay, guide form Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/harder-better-faster-stronger-115842[/quote] [quote=Ssyrak]Summoner Level: 30 Post Count (at time of request - counting this post): 86 Spell & Grammar check completed: YES (I'm German so please don't expect perfect English. But I did my best) Guide For (champion): Leona Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I put a lot work in my guide. I wanted to give players a well written and in-depth guide to Leona as she is a real powerful and funny champ to play. A review would help improving it. What I'd like you to focus on: When reading my guide you should focus on anything that is important for yourself as I want a honest opinion. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/daughter-of-amun-ra-an-indepth-guide-to-leona-101449?page=1 [/quote] [quote=Blydden] Summoner Level: 30 Post Count (at time of request): 223 (224 including this one?) Spell & Grammar check completed: [color=#00ff00][b]YES[/b][/color] Guide For (champion): [[Ezreal]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to know if I've written my guide correctly this time. I really do. What I'd like you to focus on: My format. I believe that the information is all correct this time especially, as I have examined my numbers myself and theorycrafted on this champion, [[Ezreal]], more than two hundred times. I just want it to be an interesting read, as well as informative. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/how-to-master-prodigious-spellcraft-104051 [/quote] [quote=Lugignaf] Summoner Level: Lugignaf Post Count (at time of request): 3831 Spell & Grammar check completed: Eyup Guide For (champion): Nasus Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It's my third Nasus guide and currently riding the lines of 5th/6th highest rated. It is also my first guide to get over 20 votes and I just want to be drawing as much attention to it as I can. What I'd like you to focus on: Alternate item choices and explanations. I'm not a person who explains stuff IRL too well and, I know some of that has transferred into my guide Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-jungle-where-angels-fear-to-tread-122154]NASUS ES NUMERO UNO![/url][/quote] [quote=Trojan995] Summoner level: 30 Post count at request: 2338 Spell/Grammar check: Yeah Guide for: [[twisted fate]] Why I'd like this to be reviewed: I didn't have my last guide reviewed because it got a lot of exposure so I didn't worry too much about it, but this one has gotten so few votes. I didn't work very hard on it when it first came out but I switched around the build a lot and I rewrote the description to be more detailed, so now I've put a lot more effort into it and I'd like to see what touch-ups I can do to make it perfect. guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/twisted-fate-card-games-119009 [/quote] [quote=Symphunny] Summoner Level: 30 Post Count (at time of request): 238 Spell & Grammar check completed: YES Guide For (champion): [[Cho'gath]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I am looking for further possible improvements as well as tips to organization. What I'd like you to focus on: jungle section, i need help in really improving it Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/junglin-cho-holy-shyt-dont-eat-me-revising-soon-63383 [/quote] [quote=RosePhoenix] Summoner Level: 30 Post Count (at time of request): 295 Spell & Grammar check completed: YES Guide For (champion): [[Renekton]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Just created it. Would like some feedback. What I'd like you to focus on: Everything! Format, layout, build, etc! Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/fednekton-interior-crocodile-alligator-125283 [/quote] [quote=XnMiller] Summoner Level: 30 Post Count (at time of request): 126 Spell & Grammar check completed: YES (I'm sure some slipped past me). Guide For (champion): [[Talon]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I'm a novice guide writer and know it needs some improvement. What I'd like you to focus on: I'm not worried about format so much as I am worried about content. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/talon-assassin-extraordinaire-129230 [/quote] [quote=Calibern] Took me awhile, but I finally meet all the requirements. XD Summoner level: 30 Post count:102 (in forums it says i only have 94, you can check profile to see though) Spell check: YES Guide for: [[Xin Zhao]] Why I'd like this reviewed: I worked on it for a while I think I could still use some improvement. Also, it's very hard to get votes without a vet reviewing it. What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you think could use improvement. Guide link:[url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/xin-zhao-the-bane-of-squishies-97878]Click this or on my signature.[/url] edit: I comment on your guide awhile back. Does that count, or will I have to comment again? [/quote] [quote=IceCreamy] Guide For (champion): Lux, Caitlyn, Janna Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Because I want to know what other people think about it, and your topic caught my eye :P What I'd like you to focus on: What you think about the build, the explanation and the reasoning. Also I really need some better titles :P Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/janna-blow-your-enemies-away-114075 [/quote] [quote=Ssyrak] Hey, jhoijhoi. I'd like to ask you to review another guide I just wrote. It's pretty exotic as it is about a jungling Cassiopeia. Summoner level: 30 Post Count (at time of request): 117 (counting this post as well) Spell & Grammar check completed: YES (still trying to find some mistakes, will have found them tomorrow) Guide For (champion): Cassiopeia Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It is very exotic. Jungling with Cassiopeia. I'd like to hear your opinion. What I'd like you to focus on: Please focus on anything that's important for you. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-snakes-jungle-jungling-guide-for-cassiopeia-130529 [/quote] [quote=PsiGuard] [color=#0080ff]Summoner level:[/color] 30 [color=#0080ff]Post count:[/color] 890 [color=#0080ff]Spell check:[/color] Yes. [color=#0080ff]Guide for:[/color] [[Alistar]] [color=#0080ff]Why I'd like this reviewed:[/color] You wanted a rework, you got one. I've revamped most of the formatting and completely rewritten a lot of the sections. I also added a third high-damage AP build. [color=#0080ff]What I'd like you to focus on:[/color] Any mistakes I've made, or formatting suggestions if anything comes to mind. Laning Phase and Team Fights sections are more or less the same, so you can skip those if you want. Click the awesome stamp in the sig ;) [/quote] [quote=Blowfeld] [color=#00ffff]Summoner Level:[/color] 30 [color=#00ffff]Post Count:[/color] 111 [color=#00ffff]Spell & Grammar check completed:[/color] YES [color=#00ffff]Guide For (champion):[/color] Riven [color=#00ffff]Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:[/color] Because I'd like some constructive criticism from a guide pro; [color=#00ffff]What I'd like you to focus on:[/color] structure& layout, grammar mistakes WORD did not find; [color=#00ffff]Guide Link:[/color] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/riven-things-get-comprehensive-at-twisted-treeline-132643]This is where your cursor likes to be left clicked[/url] [/quote] [quote=th3BlackAngel] Summoner Level: 30 Post Count: 426 Spell Check: yes Guide for: [[Nidalee]] Why I'd like this to be reviewed: Remade it and re-released it. Archived the old one. What I'd like you to focus on: Everything, but if you could give some special attention to the playstyle section. [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/nidalee-olympic-gold-medalist-javelin-toss-129318]Nidalee-Olympic Gold Medalist (Javelin Toss)[/url] [/quote] [quote=Khazem] Summoner Level: 30 Post Count: 120 Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes Guide For: General guide for solo'ing top Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I feel it's still very incomplete and lacking a bit. I'm looking for some good suggestions/feedback as to what I can add to the guide and maybe things I can expand on. What I'd like you to focus on: The content of the guide, I kinda have the feeling I overlooked a bunch of stuff. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-solo-top-lane-and-you-all-you-need-to-know-132124 [/quote] If I missed anyone just request again.[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sona-super-support-revamped-for-support-overhaul-77657]Confehdehrehtheh's Sona Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict:[/color] A very solid and well thought-out Sona guide that focuses on the utility she brings to the team as a support. It is up to date with the sustain nerf, and the author has clearly considering and even changed the original build to support these changes. Overall a very in-depth guide, the gameplay section would be invaluable to a new Sona player. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements:[/color] The guide is in-depth, but not very aesthetically pleasing. A keen reader would be able to read through this, but someone just browsing will not be hooked on the guide through visuals alone. Adding some formatting, colour and centring icons/heads would be a great start and a good improvement to an already fantastic guide. Constructive Criticism: 1) :/ Quints of Avarice? Now that the support meta isn't that strong, I don't think these are necessary. However, you do buy two Philo Stones, so it's probably fine. 2) Patch Notes/Changelog should be moved to the bottom, due to delaying the reader from reading more fun stuff. 3) Could you skew your build to be based on some more AP? As sustain was nerfed, Sona's attacks should deal some damage. Her Q is a power house with a Lich Bane :P 4) Skills section: Is a great wall of text and lot of copied information. Delete the wiki info and just leave your own stuff there. Also, consider using columns, or some sort of formatting to make your section look better. 5) No need to list useless summoner spells. 6) No suggestion of Quints of Fortitude? Or Seals of Replenishment? Or Glyphs or Shielding? More alternative runes would be good. 7) Try centring your item icons and headings. 8) You could detail an alternative build that focuses on AP to go with your AP vs Cooldown/support chapter.[/quote]

[quote=PsiGuard]You missed dis one. [quote=PsiGuard] [color=#0080ff]Summoner level:[/color] 30 [color=#0080ff]Post count:[/color] 946 [color=#0080ff]Spell check:[/color] Yes. [color=#0080ff]Guide for:[/color] [[Veigar]] [color=#0080ff]Why I'd like this reviewed:[/color] I just released it. Took me a while due to an influx of schoolwork, but it's finished now. Give it a run-through and let me know what you think. [color=#0080ff]What I'd like you to focus on:[/color] Any mistakes I've made, or formatting suggestions if anything comes to mind. This guide is a tad bit shorter (due to a lack of multiple builds or a jungle section), so I'm open to more ideas of chapters to add. [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/veigar-a-very-vicious-villain-131275] WHO'S GOT ALLITERATION NOW?![/url] [/quote][/quote]

[quote=SirSpankAlot]I think ya forgot my request on page 86 xd. So time to re-sumbit Summoner Level: 30 Post Count: 332 Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes Guide For: Jungle Skarner Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Well I think my guide lacks something. I don't know whatD:. What I'd like you to focus on: The item build and the Guide itself overal. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sirspankalots-way-of-spanking-with-skarner-jungle-112315[/quote]

[quote=Ssyrak]Think you forgot my request. :P [quote] Summoner Level: 30 Post Count: 126 Spell % Grammer Check completed: YES Guide for Cassiopeia Why I'd like this to be reviewed: It's an exotic guide about jungling with Cassiopeia What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that's important for you. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-snakes-jungle-jungling-guide-for-cassiopeia-130529?page=1 [/quote][/quote]

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]Summoner Level: 30 Post Count (at time of request): 3122 Spell & Grammar check completed: YES Guide For (champion): Sivir Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Just unarchived it and I want someone (or several someones) to look it over What I'd like you to focus on: Does it flow well? Are things well explained? The basic stuff Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/kills-what-kills-a-guide-to-tanky-dps-supportive-sivir-130320] Kills? What kills?[/url][/quote]

[quote=PsiGuard][quote=Ssyrak] Think you forgot my request. :P [quote] Summoner Level: 30 Post Count: 126 Spell % Grammer Check completed: YES Guide for Cassiopeia Why I'd like this to be reviewed: It's an exotic guide about jungling with Cassiopeia What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that's important for you. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-snakes-jungle-jungling-guide-for-cassiopeia-130529?page=1 [/quote] [/quote] Actually, she didn't. It's in that massive list.[/quote]

[quote=Ssyrak]Right. Seems like I just couldn't find it. :P I'm sorry jhoijhjoi.[/quote]