jhoijhoi's review & discussion service

[quote=Zyv0x]Well from what I can see it's closed? Well last time I checked anyway.[/quote]

[quote=Beeswarm17][color=#00ffff]Summoner Level:[/color] 30 [color=#00ffff]Post Count (at time of request):[/color] 218 [color=#00ffff]Spell & Grammar check completed:[/color] YES [color=#00ffff]Guide For (champion):[/color] Riven [color=#00ffff]Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:[/color] I'd like some serious consideration as to whether I need a total revamp or if some targeted changes are all that's required. It's not quite where I want it to be, and I'd love for a second opinion on what direction I should take. [color=#00ffff]What I'd like you to focus on:[/color] Formatting, some content, video/image suggestions (where to put them, what to use, etc.), and anything else that you feel would make it more visually comprehensive. [color=#00ffff]Guide Link:[/color] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/riven-valor-for-all-127052]Here[/url]. Also in my sig. Keep in mind I'm not in a significant rush for this, so don't worry about it if you (or those helping you) have a lot on your plate. I just want to improve it, and I know it needs improving. I'm just not sure how I can make it better, and my inexperience is showing. All help is wonderfully appreciated. Thank you![/quote]

[quote=Rudmed]Just here to help JhoiJhoi! She could use a hand.[color=#ff0000] Note: I am going do review guides with champions that I have experince with![/color] ShadowNet's Mordekaiser Guide [quote]Summoner Level:30 Post Count (at time of request):274 Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes Guide For (champion): Mordekaiser Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To make it perfect. 3rd time I'm submitting, feels like going to a doctor. What I'd like you to focus on: Everything, by everything I mean everything. Make 30 points instead of 10 so I would submit less. :d Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/carry-me-morde-108278[/quote] 1. The pictures are nice on sore eyes and provide humor...even if it is from an heretic that is reckless enough oppose the God Emperor and his Imperium. 2. [quote]This is the answer to those Magic Resistance stacking weaklings, combines with your mastery Archaic Knowledge for a total of 49% magic penetration[/quote] that ought to be 55% no? 3. I'd get rid of [[frozen heart]] in the defensive item section. I'd only mention [[thornmail]] against heavy AD teams. 4. TL;DR is always a nice touch. Problems: 1. The items I mentioned above. 2. Update skills since Morde's nerf. 3. The webs that you have are great, but need a more flowing direction. For example go left to right and then break off to the ending items in the middle. That is all I see so +1, and I'm off to the next one! Oh and SPACE MARINES![/quote]

[quote=Rudmed]Ssyrak's [[Leona]] guide! HOLY FUDGE THATS ALOT OF BUILDS! [quote]Ssyrak wrote: Summoner Level: 30 Post Count (at time of request - counting this post): 86 Spell & Grammar check completed: YES (I'm German so please don't expect perfect English. But I did my best) Guide For (champion): Leona Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I put a lot work in my guide. I wanted to give players a well written and in-depth guide to Leona as she is a real powerful and funny champ to play. A review would help improving it. What I'd like you to focus on: When reading my guide you should focus on anything that is important for yourself as I want a honest opinion. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/daughter-of-amun-ra-an-indepth-guide-to-leona-101449?page=1[/quote] 1. Lots of pictures and is broken down very well. Good job! 2. Very well written you obviously have alot of experince (and I could learn a trick or two). My concerns: 1. [[Warmog's armor]] Does it give you alot of life? Yes, it does but that life is not great without resistances. I personally am not a fan of it on tanks because unless you have alot of resistances the gold is almost useless. [[Aegis of Legion]] would serve your team better imo. 2. Overall for your tanking builds I feel as though [[Randuin's omen]] would serve as a better item then [[frozen heart]]. Gives better effective health, and provides a slow along with attack speed reduction on a click of a button. 3. [[greater seals of evasion]] This is a chance, and I'm not bashing it. I believe flat armor seals would serve you better. Glyphs are good, so are quints. Marks are probaly okay as well. 4. Don't even mention [[boots of swiftness]]....no seriously...just don't. 5. About your graph, I'd get it checked out by a vet named Searz. He is the master at that stuff, and I'm sure he would be happy to help ya double check your math there. That is all I can see right now, so those are just a few things I see as possible problems with your guide.[/quote]

[quote=Icuonuez][color=#00ff00]Summoner Level:[/color] 30 [color=#00ff00]Post Count (Time of Request):[/color] 179 [color=#00ff00]Spell+Grammar check:[/color] Yes [color=#00ff00]Guide for (champion):[/color] [icon=Leona] Leona [color=#00ff00]Why I'd Like This Reviewed:[/color] I have recieved no comments on how I can improve the build. I need to know what I need to do in order to make the guide optimal. I would also like to know if there are better item options available. I would also like to know if those items are core, or situational. [color=#00ff00]What I'd Like You to Focus on:[/color] Visual Appeal, Item Options, Formatting, Images, and Quintessence Choices. [color=#00ff00]Guide Link:[/color] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/leona-like-a-deer-in-headlights-136716]Here[/url] I am in no rush to have this guide reviewed. I just need some feedback, positive or negative.[/quote]

[quote=Ssyrak]Thanks a lot Rudmed for reviewing my guide. I already ansered your comment. ;) PS: Anyway, I would be happy if jhoijhoi will review it as well.[/quote]

[quote=Rudmed][quote=Ssyrak] Thanks a lot Rudmed for reviewing my guide. I already ansered your comment. ;) PS: Anyway, I would be happy if jhoijhoi will review it as well. [/quote] She will get to it, I'm just trying to point out flaws that she might point out. Hopefully save her a couple things atleast.[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi]Hey guys, I'm sorry I haven't been up to date with these. It's because university is coming to a close and I have two assignments due, my birthday is tomorrow, I'm flying up to see my little sister graduate from high school (receive awards at Award Night) on Tuesday as a surprise because none of my family could travel down for my birthday, AND THEN an exam on Warlemming's birthday on the 14 of November. THEEEEEEN we drive up 6 hours to watch my sister and Warlemming's brother go to prom (they're in the same grade) about 1 hour after my exam on Warlemming's birthday. And then after the 15th of November, I will be free. With nothing to do. For about 3 months (half of November, all of December, all of January, half of February). Then I have uni again. So, during those 3 months of vacation. I promise I will be able to do a shit tonne of reviews. If you guys have been patient this long, a little longer won't hurt. So, on the 14th of November, I will post here before I attend my exam, and ask you ALL to resubmit your requests for those still interested in a review from me. Thank you all :)[/quote]

[quote=Classic Crime]Happy birthday![/quote]

[quote=Beeswarm17]You sound like you've got plenty to keep you busy. Good luck! Have fun on those birthdays![/quote]