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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by pepsiM4A1 » October 3, 2012 12:30pm | Report
I just opened a review shop, I will review guides for free but a rep would be nice too^^.
I have experience with some champions. If you ask me to review a Fiora guide, I would say much more if you ask me to review a Nunu guide. If I am not experienced I will talk about the general guide.

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I won't usually downvote but if it is neccesary, I will. If you have a little wierd guide, I won't vote but I will tell you how to improve your guide. If I downvoted or if I didn't vote, you can ask again for a review.
It may take time until I review your guide since I am busy with school...


Guides Reviewed :


MejickPuf's Renekton Guide(+1)
H4xDefender's Jax Guide(+1)
Anastasios's Malzahar Guide(+1)
bsurma's Darius Guide(+1)
Sujing's Maokai Guide(+1)
H4xDefender's Gangplank Guide(+1)
Maelstrom147's Riven Guide(+1)
Slaydis's Fiddlesticks Guide(+1)
oxide110's Twisted Fate Guide(+1)
TheMcDanee's Amumu Guide(+1)
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by MejickPuf » October 3, 2012 4:55pm | Report
Summoner Level:30

Server:NA

Champion:Renekton

Have I reviewed this guide before?:No

Anything I should know?:Not really.

Link to guide:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/renekton-territorial-agressiveness-jungle-update-249445
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by H4xDefender » October 3, 2012 11:07pm | Report
Summoner Level: 30
Server: NA
Champion: Jax
Have I reviewed this guide before?: no
Anything I should know?: its ugly don't comment on that
Link to guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/competitive-solo-top-jax-206488
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by pepsiM4A1 » October 4, 2012 7:57am | Report
MejickPuf wrote:

Summoner Level:30

Server:NA

Champion:Renekton

Have I reviewed this guide before?:No

Anything I should know?:Not really.

Link to guide:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/renekton-territorial-agressiveness-jungle-update-249445

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Thornmail
Excellent anti-carry item. Kill them without killing them.

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Thornmail
Excellent anti-carry item. Kill them without focusing them.

You have a lovely layout and I really don't know if the item build is good but since I am not a Renekton player, I assume it is good. I really think you go too defensive.
You can add much more, something like "Solo Top Match-Ups", "Jungle Match-Ups" and even "Strategies".
You have a +1 from me!
I will watch your guide to see if you improve it or not:D
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by pepsiM4A1 » October 4, 2012 8:05am | Report

Summoner Level: 30
Server: NA
Champion: Jax
Have I reviewed this guide before?: no
Anything I should know?: its ugly don't comment on that
Link to guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/competitive-solo-top-jax-206488

My brother voted on that, his name is KSS Awake. I can't vote:D
Just look at what he wrote. Same I wanted to say:)
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Anastasios » October 4, 2012 8:11am | Report
Summoner Level: 30
Server: EUNE
Champion: Malzahar
Have I reviewed this guide before?: No
Anything I should know?: Not really
Link to guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/malignant-malzahar-2-0-225519

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by pepsiM4A1 » October 4, 2012 10:18am | Report
Anastasios wrote:

Summoner Level: 30
Server: EUNE
Champion: Malzahar
Have I reviewed this guide before?: No
Anything I should know?: Not really
Link to guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/malignant-malzahar-2-0-225519

+1!
You have a great guide but I tought of your masteries. Then I remembered that Malzahar is an AP carry not an AD carry. Your matchups are good but I really think they can be more detailed.
I was used to take Rod of Ages on Malzahar but still, Rylai's Crystal Scepter works well. If you think that the match will be long, a Rod of Ages is much better.
And now, Quicksilver Sash really counters Malzahar hard. I have something to say, you always talk like you have some sort of stupid enemies. Usually people do that, but you should talk like your emeis are some sort of CLG players.
Other from that, nice layout and again, a +1 from me!
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by bsurma » October 4, 2012 11:56am | Report
Summoner Level: 30

Server: EUNE

Champion: Darius

Have I reviewed this guide before?: No

Anything I should know?: No, not really. I just need more opinions on my guide.

Link to guide: Here.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Sujing » October 5, 2012 6:16pm | Report
Summoner Level: 30
Server: NA
Champion: Maokai
Have I reviewed this guide before?: No.
Anything I should know?: Thank you for taking the time to look at my guide!
Link to guide: Here you go.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by H4xDefender » October 6, 2012 10:02am | Report
Summoner Level: 30
Server: NA
Champion: Gangplank
Have I reviewed this guide before?: No
Anything I should know?: No
Link to guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/competitive-solo-top-gangplank-250716
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