ORDZ: The Raging Spark

[quote=ORDZ][color=#ff0000][/color] [color=#ff0000][b]ORDZ: The Raging Spark[/b][/color] (Melee) Lore: Ordz is a humble electrician from Piltover. He have a sister that works in Jayce laboratory. During the incident on Jayce laboratory his sister was severely injured that needs life support in order to survive. As a poor electrician he ask for help from Jayce but Jayce is too focus in taking revenge on Viktor that he was ignored. His sister died and Ordz went mad.. to be continued "[color=#00ff00]Power is my heart, Energy is my soul. And what makes me spark is my anger.[/color]" [b][color=#00ffff]Star Flair[/color][/b](Passive): When Ordz dies he shoots a flair in the sky revealing all enemies including invisible units for 10 seconds. [b][color=#00ffff]Shock Power[/color][/b](Active): Focuses electricity in both fist providing additional damage to his basic attack for 10 seconds Mana Cost: 75 Cooldown: 24 / 22 / 20 / 18 / 16 seconds Attack Damage: 20 / 25 / 30 / 35 / 40% [b][color=#00ffff]Spark Rod[/color][/b](Active): Ordz will place a rod and electricity will travel from the rod to him or an allied champion. (Need to reactivate the skill again to select the champion within the range of the rod) Can place the rod from 500 range. Ordz can select any allied champion within the rods range even if he is more than 500 range away. It provides Attack and Movement speed to a connected champion within range of the rod. Attack Speed: 25 / 35 / 45 / 55 / 65% Movement Speed: 11 / 12 / 13 / 14 / 15% Duration: 6/7/8/9/10 seconds Cost: 75 mana Cooldown: 15 seconds Range: 700 All enemy units passes through the traveling electricity is slowed for 5 seconds and electricity deals magic damage . Can only damage enemies once. Slow: 40 / 50 / 60 / 70 / 80% Magic Damage: 65 / 95 / 125 / 155 / 185 (+0.10 per ability power) The electricity connection will be lost when the champion went our of range.( rod is stationary and can only place 1 rod at a time) [b][color=#00ffff]Piercing Strike[/color][/b](Active): Ordz transforms into electricity then dashes and deal magic damage to all enemies that he passes through Cost: 100 / 95 / 90 / 85 / 80 Mana Cooldown: 17 / 15 / 13 / 11 / 10 seconds Magic Damage: 85 / 125 / 165 / 205 / 245 (+0.10 per ability power) [b][color=#00ffff]Overload[/color][/b](Active): Ordz will flash to a location and will burst electric current damaging surrounding enemies. (2 seconds delay before ORDZ Burst.) Mana Cost: 150 Teleport Range to Center of AoE: 900 Radius of AoE: 600 Cooldown: 130 / 115 / 100 seconds Magic Damage: 500 / 750 / 1000 (+ 250% AP) [b][color=#00ffff]Appearance[/color][/b]: Huge Guy( a bit bigger than Alistar) Huge metal bracers, Head is Skull covered with sparking electricity. Arms is covers with metal(shiny like Colossus). Huge Metal Colar in the neck. Theres two rod at the back that always sparking. Theres huge cable connected from the back to the metal bracers.[/quote]

[quote=Killshotarcher]that passive is incredibly over powered and, so is the attack strength increase time limit on shock power. and the ulti does way to much damage and is very overpowered since it can do over 3000 damage thanks to the Ap add on and he could probably easly get a triple against enemies with full health just from that ulti.[/quote]

[quote=ORDZ]Thanks Killshotarcher... I made some changes. I haven't finish my Lore yet. =)[/quote]