Bit of help with my first guide?

[quote=Stomper]Bit of help with my first ever guide? http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/100-wife-steal-stompers-comprehensive-thresh-guide-wip-373293 OK, so it's really rough, but I'm wondering if I could get a few pointers on my first guide. Less about formatting, more about what info you'd like me to include (though I'm not gonna say no to godly formatting tips) [b]If you play Thresh- what kind of stuff do you really wish was in guides? Like not the generic buy this, ward here, AA the ADC when he's CS-ing, etc... anything different you'd like to know?[/b] Experienced guide guru's, what kind of stuff should I be putting in? Thanks :-) Edit- Guide has been archived until it's closer to completion. Edit 2- Guide unarchived. Advice pls :D?[/quote]

[quote=Kirluu]The whole point of writing a guide is for you to present valuable information to others, so asking for valuable information to be presented to you, so that you can present it in your guide, doesn't seem super logical to me. I suggest checking out other guides and basically learning and experiencing on your own. Make sure to watch LCS and see how the professionals go about things; you're bound to see some Thresh picks going down pretty much all the time. Also, don't underestimate the importance of formatting in your guide. One thing is presenting valid and useful information and tips and tricks in a guide, but another thing is making that information be presented in a manner that makes it readable. Even lenghty forum posts [i]can[/i] get tiresome to read, so imagine an entire guide with walls of text. Let me put it straight: Nobody but your friends or something will read your guide all the way through, unless it's a case of reviewing it per request. In conclusion, I just want to note: I have not read your guide, nor do I intend to, since I do believe this post is to be considered guide advertisement, and thus I simply take it as a more general help thread, rather than providing feedback for your guide itself. Have a nice day. Kirluu~[/quote]