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Hi there ppl, i have joined recently the Mobafire community and the League of Legends community and im very happy of be a part of this great community i usually play Dota but i be dicoraged bacause im preety new at that and the ppl harrass me, so i been discouraaged and leave the thing alone, later i discovered Lol and when i play my first game i advice was my first game in the champ select screen and one guy says to me "como top i help u out", i play as sivir because i like girls and i see the abilities and i think is usefull, the guy told me when i advance and when i fall up, we dominate our like he plays as Sion and help me a los to get kills, all my teamates cheer me when i get my kills, at the end of the game and with one voctory on me, all my teammates says things like "u do excelent kid" or "kepp climbing uop u have attitudes for this", i was happy finnaly i found a game when the ppl is nice to u even if u dont know how to play, today i am lvl 15 and when i see new ppl who was afraid to have mistakes i say "do as u can, do your bes, if we lose all we lose if we win all we win" and i discoverd more ppl to help then more ppl to harras u and im happy to be part of this, its only my impression of a grat community, in another oporttunity, a guys playing as Singed want blue at the beggining, and a guys playing Xerath take thir blue, the guy gets mad and start to running to the other team saying "i fed them u never can win" i take the lead and im playing at Karma i said " do as u want we win with u or without u" and all my teammates starts to play as if lifes depend on it, we want to win and show that guy a lesson, we play hard and we win in the afterchat the other team say to us "guys u do excellent u have a rebel in your team feeding us and u dont give up" i answer " we fight as a team we die as a team and we win as a team, victiry or deafeat never depend in one person" i have a good day i know that singed guys are around the server harrasing others, but maybe some `ppl teach he another le***on of teamwork, i think thats all, tnx for reading i expect your commente of this, tnx to all who reading, tnx Mobafir for give us a place to express and share our knowledge about Lol
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Now that that rant is over, I just have one suggestion for you. Paragraphs, use them. It was difficult to read through your blog because there were no divisions (there were grammar problems too but I could care less about them). Turn that chunk of text into 3-4 paragraphs and it will be a much more manageable read.
Edit: also periods. I'm not sure you have a single period in the entire blog. Some of those commas should definitely become periods instead for readability.
Any way glad too see you trying to carry on the great community spirit. Keep it up! its people like you that this community needs