And how do you add some pictures? I'm new to putting this stuff on here.

It's like my build but worse :P

This is because when gearing towards damage, the loss of survivability makes you die faster, and thusly you will deal the same amount of damage by the time you're dead, without having tanked as much damage.

you need pictures and more gameplay, I will hold off on my vote till you fix these. Take a look at Jhoi Jhoi's how to make a guide just go to the build and guides section--> top rated guides and its somewhere there. Also switch this to comment required to vote since you don't want trolls