this music...

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]is annoying me. http://grooveshark.com/#!/s/March2/4zxN0D?src=5 I'm writing a march in a standard american military march form (sousa style). I have a first strain and a second strain...and what may or may not be a trio (which isn't harmonized, I know). I have not figured out what I'm gonna do for my dog-fight section, either. erg.[/quote]

[quote=Xiron]Lulz I cant listen to it. Grooveshark's donw in Germany. Thanks GEMA.[/quote]

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]gaaaaaaaaaah Maybe I'll upload it to youtube then...erg.[/quote]

[quote=PotatisFarfar]Not my genre to critic, but i can tell it isn't finished. Clearly lacking stuff. But nice so far.[/quote]

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]thanks...I started it on Easter sunday and have it about 1/3 of the way done, I'd say. I'm just irritated at it because it doesn't sound quite right to me.[/quote]

[quote=Phoenix0000ff]I think the second strain may sound a bit too much like the first. If you vary it a little more then the dogfight should be easier. Just my thoughts. I'd start with the bass because obviously the offbeat continuous mmm bop mm bop isn't going to make a dogfight XD Marching music delightful stuff really : )[/quote]