I like the lane build but you should improve your coding and you should write more comprehensible.
Expand the purchase order on top of the guide and make use of all tools (Start Items, Optional Items and so on).

These builds are ******ed. AP Hecarim?...comon now.

bad builds

Your main laning build, which this guide is based around is badly lacking in magic resist,

Choosing atmas since its nerf, only adds at most 50 damage, which can be gained from other items at a higher rate. i understand that this can be fought with the crit and armor bonus but again, it is not enough to make a difference.

The mastery build misses a number of inportant sustain ablity points, like life steal, mana regen and health regen, which ni most builds you would pick up 2/3.

As far as you runes go, picking up mr per lvl glyphs would provided a greater advantage late game than the 8.something points of damage provided.

Your item section is a bit allover the place. Not enough reasons given.

For example i find that skipping over wriggles and rushing a trinity force for the health, mana movement, slow and on cast bonus' greatly out commands the small amount of lifesteal, armor and damage gained from wriggles. While most will claim that a free ward is always good, if you are playing properly, and keeping your creep score up, a spare 75 g will be nothing to you.

Just my thoughts on the guide.

runes, especially the quintessences, are a bit... WHAT????
plus the boots of swiftness. Believe me man you get very little AD from your passive

Okay can

Okay can

@shizbot1 Which part? I can change it
@sleepdude36 I'm gonna change it soon

Not bad. But can change the early game, mid game, and late game?

I still find this fairly difficult to read :? or is it just me

erm i stop advertising 1 day after the warning :)

You made a guide for a champion which hasn't even came out in your server? and you are advertising your guide on others, That's just pathetic.