CC please

[quote=ShoreXShot]Let me know what you think... needs something just cant figure it out. [img=http://i.imgur.com/SLaI2.png][/quote]

[quote=Lugignaf]Well first of all, I can't see your sig. You might want to get that fixed. EDIT: Now that you fixed it, it looks good if not simple. I'm not a major image person though. You're gonna have to get other people to C&C.[/quote]

[quote=ShoreXShot]Text has always been one of my problems as I focus on the graphics and sometimes just don't include the text... Exceptions being when the sig is all text(banners/logos). A majority of the work I put into my sigs is in the rendering... I always do my own renders, which can take a decent amount of time when you have to deal with a lot of particles... Thanks for all the CC so far...[/quote]

[quote=SarcasmAppreciated]Too dark, terrible text, no centralized focal point and the multifocal vibe ain't working for you. One effect that is lously executed :/[/quote]

[quote=Kirluu]Might just be my personal opinion, and I can't tell how you should apply this, but I think some contrast would help a lot. It looks slightly dull. Some more lively colours along with the contrast difference should make it a whole lot more interesting to look at.[/quote]

[quote=leipetaco]You don't have a clear focus. It's just a bunch of stuff putt together without creativity. I always say to starting photoshoppers: START SIMPLE with simple i mean: - Render - Background - Some text You can use some effects with brush/lighting/gradient but don't start with multiple c4d's in a signature. First learn the basic, then go further.[/quote]