Asking for feedback-Lol comic

[quote=astranime]Hio, I made my first comic for the lol contest, and i would like to ask you guys for feedback. I made this art work mostly to train myself and to learn of it, so if you guys have the time, plis leave me a comment (here or in the contest page) of what do you think about comic(art style,story,etc). Also fell free to ask any questions. I´ll be waiting for your feedback. [url=http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/view.php?id=6041294&da=y]He feels just like you...-HD download[/url] (if you want to and are able to do so i would like to ask you for your support with the contest) Thx for your time =D[/quote]

[quote=astranime]There is also a deviant art if u wanna se the art HD without downloading it http://astranime.deviantart.com/art/He-feels-361060759 You can also download from there[/quote]