A lot of spelling mistakes and bad punctuation. This makes this guide hard to read, and us readers will easily get distracted.

None of this "under construction" stuff. If it's not complete, don't publish it! It's that simple.

Here is my review (TURN ON COMMENT2VOTE TO PROTECT YOURSELF FROM TROLL VOTERS):

On the hybrid nidalee build, you should differentiate between starting items (the items you buy when you spawn with 475 gold) and early game buys. In your core items, wards are never core items, and you do not need to show the items that build into your core items (for example, remove sheen and blasting wand, and just show lich bane). Remove wards from situational and full build sets. In general you just need to clean up the PO sets for hybrid nidalee. Same advice for the starting items of AP nidalee; break it up into different starting items choices (i.e. boots and 5 health pots, doran's and 2 health pots). Again with AD/Bruiser nidalee, clean up the starting items set.

Try reading through your guide to clean up grammatical errors and typos, because you have a few.

In your summoner spells you really should separate your two recommended summoners, and the other options. And again GRAMMAR.

Your rune explanation is extremely confusing. You don't need to explain the basics of Runes in your guide, simply explain why you chose the runes that you did, and how they benefit nidalee.

You really want to explain your mastery choices as well.

You are lacking an explanation of your item choices, and I would strongly recommend rethinking the Blade of the Ruined King choice for hybrid nidalee.

Some small coding errors in the ap items section (just look it over), and again you really need a proper explanation of the items.

In the bruiser items section, also needs a better explanation as to why those items are best for bruiser nidalee, and I would suggest taking mercury treads for boots and look into adding some defensive stats because you are a bruiser. Items such as Maw of Malmortius and mercurial scimitar add both offensive and defensive stats, and a sunfire cape would work well with bruiser nidalee, for the health and armor, and because bruiser nidalee uses her cougar form much more often, the passive will be useful.

You should also explain a little as to why certain champs counter nidalee.

I would change the order of your sections to:

Intro
Lore
Pros and Cons
Counters
Skill Set
Ability Sequence
Masteries
Runes
Summoner Spells
Items
Gameplay
All gameplay related sections
Closing Statement

The way your guide is set up now is kind of all over the place with no real flow to the guide.

The content is there and you have some good ideas, my biggest advice is just to add A LOT more explanations so that people understand why you are recommending what you are; the reasoning behind it.

I hope this helped and I'll be looking forward to seeing your finished guide!

Peace
-Cdr. Sheperd

beast is spelled right

Can't even spell beast right, already a total fail guide.

Items, masteries and runes are alright.

But the guide content lacks.
It's really messy.
And the most informative part about it is her lore.

In all seriousness,
The choices on your summoner spells need to be explained.
Item explanations aren't far enough for the ammount of items you have in your guide.
If you want to make the guide for top and mid-lane Nidalle,
You should make sure you put up the playstyle and pro's&cons etc. for both top and mid.
It really lacks in info.

You would've been better off waiting until finishing your guide before publishing it,
Cause the way it is now I highly doubt any person will end up liking it.

If you're done finishing up your guide I would like to reconsider my vote,
Just message me whenever you feel like you've really nailed it.
But for now it's a downvote.